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Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 6:47 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    he sprang harry's friends upon them? wow. i hope harry is happy about that, for sev's sake. he's trying to do the right thing. great chapter, update soon!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, Severus is really trying, isn't he?
Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 4:51 am
Reviewer: Night_Childe25 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your Severus. I just hope Harry doesn't get too mad at him for bringing Ron and Hermione with out asking him. Nice chapter. Please hurry with the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, we'll see Harry's reactions in the next chapter.  I'll try to hurry with it.
Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 4:02 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great, i'm glad severus and harry were able to communicate better and sorted some stuff out, harrys owl scores were great and i'm glad harry can do potions. the surprise that severus has given harry by bringing hermione and ron to visit is awesome

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yep, Harry will in Potions class next year.  Severus is still jealous, but he has also realised that Harry truly needs his friends, so Severus is going to try to accept them.  Glad you liked it! 
Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 3:15 am
Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice work! This chapter was pretty good. I'm looking forward tothe next chap.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 2:28 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    What a lovely story; but I just want to cry!!

    Will they EVER find a way to reverse the spell; I hope so!! Poor Harry!

    Severus is wonderful though; so sweet...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! 

    >>>Will they EVER find a way to reverse the spell; I hope so!

    *Big evil grin* That's the million dollar question, isn't it?

    I love protective Sev, too.

Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 2:24 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    you were just in time! a few more days and i would have gotten severe withdrawl symptoms! lol loved the chapter, especially all the hugging (im a sap lol) as always looking forward to more

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm a sap, too, I admit.  I love that Harry and Severus have gotten to this point finally.
Title: Chapter 25 06 Aug 2008 2:10 am
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter! I unfortunately don't have time to list everything I liked about it because I have to go to a meeting but I hope you'll take it as a given that I think this is the best chapter of all you've written in regards to exposition and character development. I also like the way you ended it.

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  I'm very happy you liked it.

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