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Reviews For Slave Child
Title: Chapter 30 24 Feb 2022 9:11 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. That was fluffy. Like a unicorn 🦄.
Title: Chapter 30 12 Oct 2017 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Huuuuhhh.. This chapter was so satisfying that it got a sigh out of me. It was so beautifully written.

    Author's Response: Thank you! 
Title: Chapter 30 14 Sep 2011 10:47 pm
Reviewer: topeswin (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story so much! I can hardly articulate how fantastic it is.

    Author's Response: *Blushes*  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 30 24 Mar 2011 6:34 am
Reviewer: Switchfoot freak (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't stop laughing. I have a feeling that I know what's going to happen and it is probably potentialy embarassing for Harry and Severus. Bye!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 30 14 Feb 2011 12:47 pm
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww, I always love it when Severus says emotional things!

    Author's Response: Aw, thanks!  Me, too.
Title: Chapter 30 21 Jan 2011 6:44 pm
Reviewer: NickyD (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this story!

    I really like the way you write the relationship between Harry and Severus. It is slow going on both sides and very believable. Snape being glad that the slavery spell dictates that Harry lives with him is, to me, typical Snape. Although he wants Harry to be happy and not be a slave, it is easier to live by the rules of the spell than actually admit his feeling for Harry out loud.

    Love the way you dealt with Umbridge, Sev is right Azkaban was too good for her.

    At several points, my heart broke for both Harry and Snape. Harry writing letters to his friends, the talk they had after Harry's suicide attempt, it was heart-wrenching!

    Kuddos on another great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you again for these lovely reviews!  I really appreciate them and I'm happy you're enjoying the story.  Oh, those chapters were such fun to write, my favorite part of the story. 
Title: Chapter 30 08 Oct 2008 1:28 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww! How sweet is Severus! And so much more mature. (:

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 30 01 Oct 2008 2:00 am
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    If there weren't so many plot lines you could continue, this would be the perfect place to stop your story. Boy am I glad you didn't think of that!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  No, I don't want to quit now...I've still got a lot planned!
Title: Chapter 30 29 Sep 2008 7:03 am
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    whoot gooD!!!! Keep it up

    Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Title: Chapter 30 29 Sep 2008 4:58 am
Reviewer: skrwt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    10,000 thumbs up!!!

    Author's Response: Aw, thank you!

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