Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 32 19 Oct 2017 10:29 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my, I had waited for so long for that apology, I thought that it would never come.
    Umm, I also don't see Harry leaving a note to Severus, is that just a typo or.............?

    Author's Response: No he didn't leave a note--bad Harry!
Title: Chapter 32 22 Apr 2012 2:21 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I bet Harry gets hurt or maybe Severus arrives early or something. For a minute there I supposed that Harry would accidentally ruin the adoption papers and wouldn't that cause quite an emotional mess when Severus got back.
Title: Chapter 32 14 Feb 2011 1:59 pm
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    He didn't leave a note...
Title: Chapter 32 20 Jul 2010 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this story so far. You have a wonderful writing style.

    I read the previous chapters last night - your story helped me survive a 12-hour, no-sleeping shift. Thanks!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy that you're enjoying SC, and that sounds like a rough shift, all right.  I hope you've had some rest  by now.
Title: Chapter 32 30 Oct 2008 1:23 am
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I've just discovered your story and I really like it. I like how you characterised Severus : he is fiercely protective, and I think it is coherent with canon (he did stay faithful to Lili's memory for years).
    I can't wait for the next chapter, Harry has forgotten to leave a note before going outside... I guess Severus will get very worried...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you're enjoying it!  I think Severus is very protective, too, and if only he could have gotten past his old anger and let go of his bitter grudge, I think he could have been a great caretaker and father figure.  He seems like the kind of person who would be very devoted once he'd let a person into his heart.  I'm going to work on the next chapter this weekend.
Title: Chapter 32 29 Oct 2008 10:53 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    that was amazing!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 32 28 Oct 2008 6:44 pm
Reviewer: Ketrin Ann (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very fascinating and interesting story. I adore it. I wait the following chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you're enjoying it.
Title: Chapter 32 27 Oct 2008 3:36 am
Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! but let me guess what happens in the next chap; harry forgot to write a note. right? Again, GREAT JOB!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You're right; Harry forgot all about the note.
Title: Chapter 32 27 Oct 2008 3:08 am
Reviewer: Mysterious Jedi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Did Harry remember to leave a note?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  No, he forgot the note.
Title: Chapter 32 26 Oct 2008 7:06 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Snape is unusually talkative and open.
    I hope that Harry won't get kidnapped. Mila

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, Severus was rather talkative, but he's comfortable with Harry by this point and he thought it would help Harry to know more about his own past.  No, Harry isn't going to get kidnapped, not at this point anyway!

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