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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Harry does still have issues, but I thought after a lifetime of abuse and neglect, he would surely need lots of time and reassurances to overcome it. And that's not taking the slavery spell into account. It is still affecting Harry and the way he feels and thinks, too, though maybe it's slowly getting better...but he can still have a setback, as Severus learned.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, poor guys, both of them. I think it did hit Severus hard that Harry could still fear him and be uncertain about their relationship, but Severus is a pretty determined person. I think he'll get through to Harry sooner or later.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, Harry does have low self-esteem, but who wouldn't in his case? Poor kid. He really does need Severus, and Severus needs him too, so maybe they can help each other. And smushy is always good, lol!
You know when I first starting reading this story, I thought that it would be really depressing, but you have managed to make us feel happy that Harry finally has someone who cares. I still really want the slavery spell to be lifted, it would make me really really really happy--really! ;) I will be so sad when this story ends; did you say that you were going to write a sequel? :) Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Severus wasn't really so much angry as he was frightened and it just came out as anger. I'm glad you feel that way about the story; I was hoping to be able to make it uplifting in spite of the very serious and sensitive subject matter. As for the slavery spell being lifted...well, at first I said it probably wouldn't be, but I'm reconsidering that. I'm leaving all the options open and playing around with different scenarios, though I think I know how it will work out...but it probably won't be resolved until the sequel. Yes, I do think I'm going to write a sequel. Thanks again!
Looking forward to their discussion. Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, poor Harry. There are a lot of things about a parent/child relationship that he just doesn't quite understand yet, but maybe he'll learn.
Author's Response: Thank you! I liked Harry being so excited about Severus seeing him, too. But he never did have anyone like a parent who might enjoy his accomplishments before. Too bad it was kind of spoiled, lol. |
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