There is too much fluff, don't you think? Like, Severus hugging Harry almost twice every day, my father hugs me maybe once every year, you know. But, well, I don't have much problem with it except for the fact that it looks OOC.
Author's Response: Yea, I think you're right--a bit too much fluff, but oh well, the fluffier, the better, sometimes at least.
This chapter was great although I can't help wishing the spell would end soon.
| Title: Chapter 34
| 14 Feb 2011 2:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous)
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Aww I want to see them go after Draco though...
This is really exceptional! I can't wat to see how this pans out!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!
I'm not sure if I've reviewed before, and I apologize sincerely because I'm pretty sure I've been reading this from quite early on. But this story has been really really good so far and Iv been enjoying reading it immensely ...My only criticism is that the last few chapters have been... very intense to put it lightly, it seems all the more in depth communication between Harry and Severus (actual dialogue etc) has been a bit heavy. Other than that however its still very good and I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm sorry it's taken me a few days to reply...busy with Thanksgiving and all...but thank you very much! And there aren't any real 'heavy' scenes in chapter 35, lol!
Wonderfully amazing as usual! I love the way Severus and Harry interact, makes me wish my father had been a bit more like that! I can't wait to see what idea Sev comes up with to make things safe for Harry on the train. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love Harry and Severus together, too. They're such fun to write once they've become close. I'm going to try to get chapter 35 posted before Thursday, but no promises. I'll try my best, though!
And just what does Sev have in mind?
Author's Response: What does Sev have in mind? Well, tune in to chapter 35, lol,...*whistles innocently*
| Title: Chapter 34
| 17 Nov 2008 3:45 am
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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great chapter! Iwonder how Harry will react when he meets Malfoy again. and what if Draco had the time (and motivation) to translate the curse?I hope not for Harry, but it could meke for an interesting scene... (reader samelessly gives hints)
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, we will see Draco again, at least briefly, in chapter 35, but as for anything else, well, I can't give anything away...
awwww that was great i lvoe their interaction and how they get on together
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!
| Title: Chapter 34
| 17 Nov 2008 2:57 am
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| Reviewer: fanficaholic (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Can't wait for Harry and Draco to come face to face!
Author's Response: Thank you! I suppose you could say the first face to face meeting between those two will be in chapter 35, but it probably won't be as people expect.
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