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Title: Chapter 40 22 Apr 2012 7:12 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh, I hate when Harry thinks he knows better than Severus and basically wants to reprimand him. I also don't like how Severus extended his praise to Hermione and Ron but not the rest, it should be everyone praised or everyone (except Harry) ridiculed. But overall, great chapter. I want another Draco confrontation-cross my fingers as I press next.
Title: Chapter 40 14 Feb 2011 5:31 pm
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I see that conversation going better than Harry expects.

    Author's Response: Thank you for all the reviews!  I'm sorry it's taken a while for me to reply...I've been having some computer issues again.  But I'm really happy you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 40 21 Jul 2010 5:28 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, he's sorta getting the hang of it. Well, with Harry and his best friends, anyway. >.-

    I'm a bit peeved with Snape, though. I mean, yeah Draco screwed up, but the boy doesn't know how bad. I can't help but think that Severus' refusal to talk to him a bit is just going to cause more issues. In fact, I'm certain of it.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks again!  As far as Severus' teaching style and the way he treats the other Gryffindors, well, I thought it might be a little difficult for him to completely change.  He has changed a lot, but he's still sort of coming to terms with it all himself.  And it makes for a little tension in Severus' adn Harry's relationship and maybe keeps it from being too perfect.  That was the idea anyway.

    Yeah, Severus is perhaps a bit unfair to Draco, considering that Draco doesn't even understand what happened or why Severus has come around to being on 'Harry's side'.

    >>>I can't help but think that Severus' refusal to talk to him a bit is just going to cause more issues.  In fact, I'm certain of it.

    Oh, absolutely!  Truer words were never spoken.  Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 40 01 Mar 2009 7:59 am
Reviewer: xxslytheringirlxx (Signed) [Report This]
    love this story , i cant wait untill the next chapter
    keep up the good work
    SG

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Ch. 41 is with my beta now so hopefully it'll be up soon!
Title: Chapter 40 24 Feb 2009 5:51 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Anonymous) [Report This]
    questioning snape??? that's not going to be a fun conversation AT ALL... haha. i look forward to it

    Author's Response: Thanks!  And no, it won't be!
Title: Chapter 40 22 Feb 2009 11:39 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i wish harry all the luck in the world in that challenge

    Author's Response: Thank you!  He'll need it!
Title: Chapter 40 22 Feb 2009 6:19 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter...thanks for adding xxx

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 40 22 Feb 2009 4:37 am
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    hehe - good luck to Harry in that!!

    Author's Response: Yep, Harry will need some luck!  Thank you!
Title: Chapter 40 21 Feb 2009 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Good luck Harry. You really are a Brave Griffindor to attempt to face that Lion in his Den (Or should I say Sepent in his cave?)

    Great chapter!
    V.

    Author's Response: LOL!  Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed it!
Title: Chapter 40 21 Feb 2009 1:16 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh Harry is brave! he should know how much Severus likes to torment Gryffindors lol, I was glad to see that Umbridge is being punished, evil meanie she is! : )

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, I remembered that I needed to wrap up the Umbridge angle, and yes, Severus might not be very willing to change his teaching style right away, even for Harry. 

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