Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Slave Child
Title: Chapter 41 22 Apr 2012 7:27 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Darn, no real confrontation with Draco. I wish I knew more about what was going on with him though.
Title: Chapter 41 21 Jul 2010 6:01 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    So many feel-good moments in this story - I'm loving it! ^^

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you're liking it.
Title: Chapter 41 24 Mar 2009 6:21 am
Reviewer: Adah (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great! I imagine the following happening: Harry realizes that Malfoy resents him for having Snape's attention, and begins to sympathize with Malfoy while Snape remains angry with him for the spell. Eventually, Harry will be the one to turn Snape around. At least - thats how it happened in my head :). I'm sure whatever you do, it will be FANTASTIC. I love all of your writing! Besides my crazy theories, I think that Draco *must* resent Harry for Snape's attention, and is secretly vying for it all along :). After all, Lucius and Narcissa don't seem to be the best parents ever.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  As for your theory about Harry, Sev, and Draco...hmmm, that's pretty interesting.  And you're right...Lucius and Narcissa wouldn't win any Parent of the Year awards.
Title: Chapter 41 23 Mar 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: Doc Brown (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Omg, I read all of the fic in one day, and words "one giant hugfest" come to mind somehow *g*

    Author's Response: Yeah, I do like mush, lol!
Title: Chapter 41 12 Mar 2009 2:12 pm
Reviewer: Amanda Burke (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story so far. i look forward to read more soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 41 09 Mar 2009 7:53 pm
Reviewer: b_e_skrewt (Signed) [Report This]
    difficult conversation for harry and severus... makes me wonder if it was also a hard chapter to write ;-)

    Author's Response: Thank you...and yes, it was!
Title: Chapter 41 07 Mar 2009 2:29 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great chapter, sev was a great source of comfort when harry blew up at him, harry did well in his second explaination and it seems sev has taken on board what harry said

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 41 03 Mar 2009 5:09 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yippeee!!! You updated!

    I thought you did a really great, realistic job on the conversation about the way that Severus treated the Gryffindors I could really see Severus becoming defensive over Harry's complaints, and then settling down and considering them. Nice job as usual!

    I can't wait for your next update!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you approve.  I had a time writing Severus in this chapter so I'm happy it worked.  And I can't wait for your next chapter either! 
Title: Chapter 41 03 Mar 2009 12:53 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww I do love how Harry gets a temper going and Severus is always there for him, too cute, I also love how they want to do things together as father and son : )

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry can have a bit of a temper, though in this case I do think he's right...Severus is unfair to the Gryffindors and especially harsh with Neville who doesn't deserve it.  But he didn't broach the matter in the smartest way at first.  But his headache was bothering him so maybe that's partially an excuse.  Once he calmed down and was more reasonable...and maybe more 'Slytherin' in getting his point across, he had more success.  Thanks again!   
Title: Chapter 41 03 Mar 2009 5:42 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! It'll be interesting to see what happens at the Slytherin tryouts!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5