Something is definitely wrong with Him, of course. Malfoy, that is.
Author's Response: Oh yes. Definitely.
| Title: Chapter 42
| 23 Feb 2014 3:19 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I am still enjoying this story.
That's annoying how Harry rushed into that and now Severus will be disappointed in him.
This is a wonderful story. And I liked the exchange between Draco and Dumbledore, where Draco accuses Dumbledore of only listening to Harry. It's a very human moment for Draco.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Draco has a lot building up inside him right now, more than anyone knows...and he is very upset and frustrated, which may not be a good thing.
I love where this is going. First the fight with the Gryffindor boys of Harry's year... that was good. It's good that they are talking out the fears they have of Harry being close to Snape. They all know how it was between them and how Snape is to everyone in Gryffindor. And I liked his concluding that the spell ruined his ability to do non verbal magic and how Snape and Dumbledore both took him seriously and started looking into it. Very good relationships that Harry should have had in canon but didn't!
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim! I'm glad you like the scene with the Gryffindor boys. Yes, I think, even if they try to be understanding for Harry's sake, that his new relationship with Severus would be difficult for them. For so long, Harry and Severus were such enemies, and Severus still isn't very nice to the others, though he is trying at least not to make personal attacks. And yes, one great thing about writing your own story is that you can make anything happen that you want and I want so badly for Harry to have the support and the love that he didn't really have in canon.
| Title: Chapter 42
| 30 Mar 2009 12:12 am
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| Reviewer: Stephanie (Anonymous)
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This is a really good story so far. i hope you update soon. i was wondering about one thing though: what ever happened to that kid Harry saved?
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it! Do you mean the little toddler boy that Harry saved when Voldie attacked Diagon Alley? He is reunited with his parents and living happily in anonymity, lol.
| Title: Chapter 42
| 29 Mar 2009 11:44 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry! I'm sure the spell is doing something to his magic. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and especially what happened to Draco and ALec.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I will put more about what happened with Draco in the next chapters, and Alec is okay, just bruised and shaken.
I'm glad to see another chapter! :-)
An interesting theory about the slave spell--will it actually be the culprit (or is it something subconcious in Harry?)
Looking forward to more!
V.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm glad you like the theory about the slavery spell, but I'm afraid I can't answer it yet...it would give away major plot points to come, lol.
| Title: Chapter 42
| 29 Mar 2009 6:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Natasha (Anonymous)
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That was awesome- but what happens with Malfoy???? ;) I can't wait for you to update! This is a great story, and I really enjoy it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you like it. More about Malfoy over the next few chapters!
Yay for new chappies! hehe I liked this one, poor little Alex though...im glad Harry was able to be there, although it did seem like Malfoy was about to step in even if he had just threatened him...hmm..lol I cant wait to see what happens yet..as usual lol : )
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Yes, Draco was about to step in. He's angry and hurt that Alec has taken his spot, so he was sort of blustering around being a bully, but he wasn't going to actually take it to a physical level. Crabbe just got carried away (a shark scenting blood comes to mind).
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