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Title: Chapter 43 07 Apr 2009 7:15 am
Reviewer: nairobidawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry. He can't even be a rebellious teenager! I hope he doesn't try to rebel...as I don't know what will happen what with the spell and everything.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, the spell will not punish Harry for rebelling against Severus.  The spell punishes a slave for attempting to harm the master, trying to escape, and owning possessions.  But if Harry rebelled or disobeyed, the spell says that Severus could punish him any way that he wanted, though of course Severus wouldn't do anything truly dreadful.  Severus would just punish Harry as a parent and child, and he doesn't even want to do that.  Severus is pretty indulgent, which may be OOC, but I think now that he loves Harry and knows that he has mistreated him in the past that Severus would bend over backwards to not have to punish Harry again.  Thanks again! 
Title: Chapter 43 07 Apr 2009 6:11 am
Reviewer: Adah (Signed) [Report This]
    You're killing me! I love how Harry is acting out and testing the boundaries - to see how awful he can be and Severus will still want him. I canNOT wait until the next update! Fantastic, as usual!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I will try to hurry with the Fest story as much as I can...I'm eager for the next chapter here too, lol!  Actually, I think we're getting a good part of the story again...well, if you like angst and mush.
Title: Chapter 43 07 Apr 2009 3:39 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Ut oh! Trouble in paradise. Harry's not good at doing what's good for him if he disagrees with it. This is getting interesting! Great chapter again. I loved Dumbledore and the questioning. Worked out very canon like and was quite realistic.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, some people have commented that the relationship is 'too perfect' and I wanted to add a little bit of conflict there.  Glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 43 07 Apr 2009 2:44 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry! That was Low! Go back and appologize right now. There was NO need to act like that much of a brat.

    Great chapter. Looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you liked it.  Well, Harry shouldn't have said those things, but he is very upset and disappointed and in his own hurt, he lashed out...not the best response, but one most of us have been guilty of before, too.  Thanks again!  

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