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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, the spell will not punish Harry for rebelling against Severus. The spell punishes a slave for attempting to harm the master, trying to escape, and owning possessions. But if Harry rebelled or disobeyed, the spell says that Severus could punish him any way that he wanted, though of course Severus wouldn't do anything truly dreadful. Severus would just punish Harry as a parent and child, and he doesn't even want to do that. Severus is pretty indulgent, which may be OOC, but I think now that he loves Harry and knows that he has mistreated him in the past that Severus would bend over backwards to not have to punish Harry again. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will try to hurry with the Fest story as much as I can...I'm eager for the next chapter here too, lol! Actually, I think we're getting a good part of the story again...well, if you like angst and mush.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, some people have commented that the relationship is 'too perfect' and I wanted to add a little bit of conflict there. Glad you liked it!
Great chapter. Looking forward to your next update. V. Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it. Well, Harry shouldn't have said those things, but he is very upset and disappointed and in his own hurt, he lashed out...not the best response, but one most of us have been guilty of before, too. Thanks again! |
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