I really don't like it. I really really don't like it. Of course I like your story, I really don't like the fact about what Harry is doing, a suicidal Harry is almost better then this one, almost. I don't even want to read it, but the curiosity is getting better of me. I hate Harry for doing this, for going to play, and I hate Severus for doing this, for not allowing Harry to play. Arrrghh! I haven't even read the full chapter.
For a minute there, I thought Harry would be mature and walk away. I hate that Harry just set himself up for this and that he doesn't realize how big of a deal this all is.
| Title: Chapter 44
| 25 Aug 2009 1:27 am
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| Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous)
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I thought Severus was going to come out and order harry to stop, so very, very glad that didn't happen! Brilliant as always! NEED to read on, so can't write more about the awesome talent you have. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Oooh maybe there will be an update here too? y'know, one of my favourite stories because its so brilliantly written and this chapter ended on a cliffe...hehe does flattery get anywhere? :P
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'll try!
yay! Excellent chapter. Great detail on this last part with the cliff hanger and such. Can't wait for the next chapter.
The suspense is killing me!
| Title: Chapter 44
| 21 May 2009 7:26 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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ecellent chapter! Very realistic (in my view anyway) that Harry would go ahead and play in the game. And very realistic that Severus is angry. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 44
| 20 May 2009 11:35 pm
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| Reviewer: nairobidawn (Anonymous)
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oh, poor harry. He's probably in major trouble right now. I hope Severus isn't too hard on him, and hopefully sees his point of view. Even though he was a bit wrong to do it anyway.
| Title: Chapter 44
| 20 May 2009 1:43 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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Thanks for the update!
I really liked Harry's thoughts when he convinced himself he would not disobey Severus if he played...
I'm looking forward to the following chapter and Severus's reation.
Oh, now that's a MEAN cliffie!! ::bawls for thirty seconds:: Now we've gotta wait until the next chapter for Harry's funeral...! ::blubbering turns to snickers:: Harry's certainly a normal narrow-focused teenager! Poor Severus is gonna have an aneurysm over him...!
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