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Title: Chapter 46 25 Feb 2022 4:03 pm
Reviewer: MeAndNotYou1001 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really should have seen this coming.
Title: Chapter 46 19 Oct 2017 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    No, Harry is having a pneumonia induced nightmare, isn't he? Please tell me he is! Oh god, please! No, that can't be!!! That just isn't. It can't be happening.
    Oh god! No! No! No!
Title: Chapter 46 22 Apr 2012 5:31 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh shoot. This is going to be awful for Harry.
Title: Chapter 46 16 Sep 2011 6:01 am
Reviewer: summer (Signed) [Report This]
    aww... stop, you're making me cy. I love mushy seet stories that make you tear up. Oh, I found this really cool text smiley. o_O Love it!^_^

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I don't like making people cry, but I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Title: Chapter 46 07 Jul 2009 9:04 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh Oh! Who's the snitch that told the paper?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You'll find out in ch. 47.
Title: Chapter 46 07 Jul 2009 2:26 am
Reviewer: Jazzy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH COME ON!!! PLEASE DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!!! OH! this is so amazing please update really soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm going to work on the next chapter during this week.
Title: Chapter 46 07 Jul 2009 12:56 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! poor Harry :( how will he cope with this?? lol poor guy needs a break, I do hope Severus rushes to his side! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, poor Harry; he does need a break.  Well, Severus doesn't realize what's going on yet, but no doubt he will be quite ferociously protective of Harry when he does.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, poor Harry; he does need a break.  Well, Severus doesn't realize what's going on yet, but no doubt he will be quite ferociously protective of Harry when he does.
Title: Chapter 46 06 Jul 2009 3:05 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi, me again. I had to answer your reponse to my review!

    I guess I expressed myself wrong in my view that Harry deserved his harsh punishment and that Severus shouldn't revoke it. What I meant was that I hope that Severus doesn't feel too guilty and let Harry off scot free.

    I think that Severus' original punishment was quite harsh in that he should have given Harry a time frame that he was grounded for. Saying indefinitely, gives Harry nothing to look forward to, and is a little harsh.

    While Severus saying that he didn't trust Harry any more was harsh, I do think that it was a very normal reaction, and Harry should really have expected that after he wilfully disobeyed Snape. Regardless of his reasons, Harry is old enough to know better, and I think that it is perfectly natural that Snape's reaction would be to confiscate items that require Harry to be trustworthy and responsible in having possession of.

    As far as taking his broom away, well that also was something I rather, and Harry should have thought of as well. I think that most parents would have punished their child in taking their broom away and forbidding them from playing Quidditch for a specific time period. Again though, Severus didn't give any time frame, which is the part I found harsh.

    If Severus had of said that You are not allowed to fly or have your broom, for lets say two weeks, that would have been perfectly reasonable.

    Harry didn't trust Severus enough either to come to him and explain what he was feeling, and so even though Severus is an adult, it probably hurt him and he retaliated with the statement that he lost trust in Harry.

    Anyway, that said, I am pleased that Severus still held Harry accountable, but gave a more reasonable time frame for his punishment.

    It was perfect Kristeh, and I will always love the way you handle these wonderful moments of Harry and Severus struggling to be father and son.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Pandora!  You brought up some good points and I agree with you.

Title: Chapter 46 05 Jul 2009 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good Chapter. Way to throw in the twist. Can't wait for it ! keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you liked it!
Title: Chapter 46 05 Jul 2009 2:46 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    oh, shit. Damn Rita! Poor Harry!!!! AHHH. I can't wait to read the next chapter, you don't even know... 10!

    Author's Response: You said it!  I'll try to write ch. 47 this week, okay?  Thanks so much! 

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