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Title: Chapter 46 05 Jul 2009 2:05 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    1)there was a portrait that overheard and spread the word. 2)someone (malfoy) was just outside the door and heard (or inside and dissilusioned) and spread the word. 3)Skeeter in all of her bug-like glory was in the hospital wing and heard and wrote it up.

    Am I even in the ball park with any of my wild guesses?

    Great chapter. I love the worried Sev at the beginning of the chapter.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    >>>Am I even in the ball park with any of my wild guesses?

    Now, do you really want to know?  I can say that it will be explained in the next chapter, okay?  And of course, Sev was very worried about Harry...his son is everything to him now.  Thank you so much!

Title: Chapter 46 04 Jul 2009 10:47 pm
Reviewer: lilette (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, no...That last line from Colin actually made my mouth drop. I feel so bad for Harry and the next chapter hasn't been put up yet! Oh, I'm almost afraid that someone really did publish his secret on the Daily Prophecy...I'm hoping it's a nightmare!!! But your chapters are always so enjoyable to read. :)

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! 

    >>>That last line from Colin actually made my mouth drop.

    But you knew everyone had to find out eventually, didn't you?  I mean, how could I let such an opportunity for angst go by? 

    >>>I'm hopikng it's a nightmare!!! 

    Harry is too!

    Thanks again! 

     

Title: Chapter 46 04 Jul 2009 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Adah (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh. My. Goodness. Hyperventilating. I knew this chapter was going to be fantastic, because you wrote it didn't you?, but I didn't know it would be this amazing! I can't wait for Harry's reaction. I cannot wait for what will happen. The Slytherin's teasing, maybe some people supporting Harry and him realizing he is valued. How long will I have to live with shortness of breath before the next chapter comes around? Take your time, seeing as time produces *this*! I loved this. Loved. this. Love. I loved how Harry explained his quidditch attachment (though I was confused, wasn't there no quidditch in fourth year b/c of the tournament?). I think a very in-personality part of that was when he said "i don't mean to be whining on it all the time" - it was very Harry. I cannot wait for the next chapter! when? when? *gasps for breath*
    Adah

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  You're being way too kind and making me blush!  But I am really happy that you enjoyed it.  I don't know if people will approve and/or agree with Harry's reaction, but it is a part of the story that I have had planned for a long time and there are reasons for it, or should I say there will be reasons for it.  I will try to write the next chapter this week and maybe have it up sometime next weekend.    
Title: Chapter 46 04 Jul 2009 7:12 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG!!! OMG!!!!

    That was a wonderful, amazing, absolutely brilliant (and long too!) chapter!!!

    I loved when Severus called Harry son, and Harry called Severus Dad. I thought my heart would melt.

    I loved that Severus softened the punishment. It was a little harsh not giving Harry a time frame that he was grounded, and I loved that he reinstated Harry's most prized possessions and apologized to Harry for saying that he didn't trust him.

    Well, I just knew that Harry blurting out that he's a slave, was a bad idea. I bet someone was lurking behind the curtains or something and just couldn't wait to go running to Rita Skeeter.

    Poor Harry. They have really got to find a cure for this slavery spell now. Harry will not be able to live a normal life. Maybe if they work really hard, and research it....

    Well, that chappie gave me the warm fuzzies. Of course that was until the end, and Miss Kristeh pulls a CLIFFIE on us!!!!!

    Well, young lady, you are sentenced to write another chappie as quickly as your delicate little fingers will type!!

    Oh, and don't forget APOP. I'm greedy. And besides, you left us with a cliffie for that one too!!!

    You are just too too cruel. But I'll forgive you if you give me a chappie soon.

    Pretty please with sugar on top? :)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you, Pandora!  I'm glad you liked that Severus relented a bit...I wasn't sure what you would think since you said for the earlier chapter that you didn't think he should.  I think Harry did deserve some punishment, but that Severus was a little harsh, too. 

    >>>Well, I just knew that Harry blurting out that he's a slave, was a bad idea.

    Yeah, Harry really should have known better, but everyone does stupid things sometimes, especially when they're upset.  Unfortunately, Harry usually has dire consequences to deal with, much more so than your ordinary person.  Finding a cure would be a very helpful thing, wouldn't it?  I'm being evil but I actually have to chuckle about comments like that...

    I will work on SC again later in the week, how about that?  I think I need a few days to recuperate!  Thanks again! 


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