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Reviews For Slave Child
Am I even in the ball park with any of my wild guesses? Great chapter. I love the worried Sev at the beginning of the chapter. V. Author's Response: >>>Am I even in the ball park with any of my wild guesses? Now, do you really want to know? I can say that it will be explained in the next chapter, okay? And of course, Sev was very worried about Harry...his son is everything to him now. Thank you so much!
Author's Response: Thank you! >>>That last line from Colin actually made my mouth drop. But you knew everyone had to find out eventually, didn't you? I mean, how could I let such an opportunity for angst go by? >>>I'm hopikng it's a nightmare!!! Harry is too! Thanks again!
Adah Author's Response: Oh, thank you! You're being way too kind and making me blush! But I am really happy that you enjoyed it. I don't know if people will approve and/or agree with Harry's reaction, but it is a part of the story that I have had planned for a long time and there are reasons for it, or should I say there will be reasons for it. I will try to write the next chapter this week and maybe have it up sometime next weekend.
That was a wonderful, amazing, absolutely brilliant (and long too!) chapter!!! I loved when Severus called Harry son, and Harry called Severus Dad. I thought my heart would melt. I loved that Severus softened the punishment. It was a little harsh not giving Harry a time frame that he was grounded, and I loved that he reinstated Harry's most prized possessions and apologized to Harry for saying that he didn't trust him. Well, I just knew that Harry blurting out that he's a slave, was a bad idea. I bet someone was lurking behind the curtains or something and just couldn't wait to go running to Rita Skeeter. Poor Harry. They have really got to find a cure for this slavery spell now. Harry will not be able to live a normal life. Maybe if they work really hard, and research it.... Well, that chappie gave me the warm fuzzies. Of course that was until the end, and Miss Kristeh pulls a CLIFFIE on us!!!!! Well, young lady, you are sentenced to write another chappie as quickly as your delicate little fingers will type!! Oh, and don't forget APOP. I'm greedy. And besides, you left us with a cliffie for that one too!!! You are just too too cruel. But I'll forgive you if you give me a chappie soon. Pretty please with sugar on top? :) Author's Response: Oh, thank you, Pandora! I'm glad you liked that Severus relented a bit...I wasn't sure what you would think since you said for the earlier chapter that you didn't think he should. I think Harry did deserve some punishment, but that Severus was a little harsh, too. >>>Well, I just knew that Harry blurting out that he's a slave, was a bad idea. Yeah, Harry really should have known better, but everyone does stupid things sometimes, especially when they're upset. Unfortunately, Harry usually has dire consequences to deal with, much more so than your ordinary person. Finding a cure would be a very helpful thing, wouldn't it? I'm being evil but I actually have to chuckle about comments like that... I will work on SC again later in the week, how about that? I think I need a few days to recuperate! Thanks again! |
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