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Title: Chapter 47 19 Oct 2017 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Harumph! I really just want to strangle Draco now, but I guess seeing Narcissa get killed in front of him is some of the repayment from karma, still I want him to be punished even more. Will Harry ever return?
Title: Chapter 47 23 Feb 2014 5:27 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wonder if Dumbledore and Snape will press charges against Draco. I bet they won't. I bet this turns into a saving Draco from himself type of story... with everyone making Draco see the error of his ways and helping him realize how wrong he was, blah, blah, blah..... boring, boring, boring. I hope it doesn't turn into something like that. I think he should be charged and punished. Oh well, I guess that's not going to happen. :(
Title: Chapter 47 22 Apr 2012 5:42 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I knew it-about Draco being upset about the loss of Severus but I wish he had been remorseful when he found out.
Title: Chapter 47 25 Aug 2009 2:15 am
Reviewer: Vicky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no! Draco! Poor guy! I don't think Harry is OOC, he lost everything he had made himself into, and independant man, he's not a person anymore, he's a possesion no matter how much people soften the blow it is understnadable that he feels like that, even if he should have got over it by now. Draco is in character, too, I think. I am very, very sympathetic towards him, and I think you set the stage for this well. I think he will seem more in character as we go on, but I also think we can't say if Draco is in or out of character, as we only ever see the mask he puts on, not who he is. Anyway, brilliant as always hope Severus realises he needs to snap Harry out of it, even if he does hurt him a little, it will be better for him in the long run. Also hope Harry grows a spine and realises having evryone know is not the end of the world as he knows it, though I am sympathetic towards him...for now. LOL Anyway, must read on! You are incredibly talented.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I have enjoyed reading your reviews so much.  It really means a lot when someone is enjoying the story and thinking of the characters.  I think you made some good points about Draco.  Unfortunately, he learned to project a mask early on.  He does have a lot of prejudices and beliefs that need to be corrected, but he is young and he can change.  Thanks again. 
Title: Chapter 47 03 Aug 2009 4:52 am
Reviewer: Ruth (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think this is a lovely story and I eagerly look forward to more chapters. Wonderful character development, lots of angst (I love angst!). Don't worry about being OOC or whatever -- just write more!

    Only suggestion/request I'd make, is please stop putting spoilers in the chapter end notes -- for example talking about Harry's upcoming suicide attempt before he made the attempt, or talking about the return to Prince Hall as being important to the story rather than letting it unfold. Sounds like someone has been making you defensive/insecure, but you don't need to justify anything -- it's a great story, just keep writing it! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much.  I appreciate it.
Title: Chapter 47 18 Jul 2009 4:55 pm
Reviewer: studiohq (Signed) [Report This]
    You kept Harry and Draco very much in character. When children are caught up in circumstances beyond their control, they always will react. Let remember you are writing children. Not small adults. So I'm gonna give you a bravo and a job well done.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!   I'm sorry it took a while to respond.  I had a really crazy week and not much free time.  I'm glad you think the boys are in character and yeah, they are still very young and caught up in very serious circumstances. 
Title: Chapter 47 17 Jul 2009 10:08 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    call me a cold hearted bitch, but i don't care one whit about draco or his mother, the little twit.

    Author's Response:

    Well, I won't call you that, and I don't know about Draco.  What he did to Harry was really horrible, and some people might find it unforgivable.  That's okay...not everyone has to like Draco, that's fine.  I do feel some sympathy for him, but he has a long way to go.  I'm not trying to make you or anyone else change their minds about Draco, really, but a thought crossed my mind that I would just like to say.  I'm presuming that lots of people here like Severus Snape and feel that he deserved a chance to be redeemed and have a chance at a better life, but let's not forget that Snape was a true Death Eater for a time in his life and during that time, I believe he also did some pretty horrible things to innocent people.  But he did come to see that he was wrong, to feel remorse, and to want to make up for that.

    Now, Draco has not gotten to that point, I admit.  Right now he is still self-centered and hasn't really come to feel remorse for harming Harry.  But I don't think he would have cast the slavery spell if he had known what he was doing.  Notifying the newspaper was a terrible thing to do, no denying it and like I said, some would say unforgivable.  I see it more as Draco, in the midst of great pain, turmoil, and anger, lashing out, having a lack of impulse control, and not thinking things through at all.  Should he go to Azkaban or receive some other type of punighment?  How hardened is Draco?  Could he learn to feel empathy?  How?  Does he deserve the chance to be redeemed and become a different type of person, or should he just be punished and taken out of the story?  People are going to have different answers to those questions, and I know that not everyone will like my plans for the rest of the story.  But it has been planned for two years now.  I had Draco's fate planned before I began writing SC, and I think it would ruin the story to make such a major change now.  The only thing I will say for certain is that Severus is not going to adopt Draco, and he will not become part of the family.

    As for Narcissa, she certainly was not a nice person, and I find it hard to feel a lot of sympathy for her too.  Overall, she was a big failure as a mother, but in the end she did try to save her son. 

    Thanks again!

Title: Chapter 47 16 Jul 2009 5:56 am
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry - what a thing to have to face. But, at least he's got Severus (and Ron, and Hermione, and Ginny... etc.) I wouldn't worry too much about OOC-ness, since it's pretty hard to write a harry & snape father/son fic that doesn't have a least a degree of OOC somewhere in the story. As for Draco, I'm not sure how I feel about him yet, but I'll read regardless of what you do with him. You've done a great job with this story. :)

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!  Sorry it took a while to respond; I had a very busy week last week and didn't have a lot of time for the computer.  Yeah, OOC-ness is almost necessary, I suppose, in a story like SC.  Thanks, too, for the vote of confidence!  I hope you'll end up satisfied!
Title: Chapter 47 16 Jul 2009 1:27 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i love the story but hate draco and if he is in the story i will stop reading it. I really wish that there would be just one story that has harry and severus that doesn't include draco that is great like this one has been. Again love the story and you are a wonderful writer but I just cant stand draco in stories like this.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for reviewing and for the compliment!  Sorry it's taken me a while to respond.  I haven't had much free time this past week so I wasn't able to do much on the computer.  I'm sorry, but Draco will have more of a role in SC from now on.  He will not become Severus' son/Harry's brother, and he is going to receive some punishment that will hopefully have an effect on him and help him to learn empathy for others.  I'm sorry if you choose not to read, but I have had the story planned for two years and I don't want to make a major change at this point. 

Title: Chapter 47 14 Jul 2009 11:29 am
Reviewer: Radcliffe23 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'll have you know that this story is so good, I stayed up until 3.30 in the morning to finish what you have so far. I couldn't stop reading, it is so great. I surely can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes out soon.

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  That means a lot to me!  Sorry it took me a while to respond; I had a crazy busy week and not much free time.  I'm going to work on a chapter for Pair of Phoenixes next, but then I will get back to SC.  

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