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Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 4:34 pm
Reviewer: studiohq (Signed) [Report This]
    Plot twist!

    Author's Response: Yes, I suppose it was.
Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 11:48 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't they have mind-healers in the Wiz World?
    Along with healing the physical, they've got to have healers for those in shock or grief and such. Just because they don't have a "place" for troubled kids, doesn't infer a lack of Professional help.
    And Draco needs *lots* of help

    Author's Response: I do not recall any mention of mind-Healers or therapists in the books, though it is entirely possible that I've only forgotten.  In the SC world I had decided not to have them, to have the wizarding world be considerably behind the Muggle one in this regard.  
Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 10:53 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh a slave eh? interesting...I wonder how Draco is going to take that news lol, I wonder if he will be happy as long as he is with Severus... :)

    Author's Response: Draco would not have been very happy, no.
Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 6:57 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well now you've gone and confused things. Previously stated the slavery spell does not allow Harry to own anything so how is he to own Draco? It would in fact have to be Severus that owns him or the spell would according to your previous works cause Harry harm. If this was the case Draco will learn nothing as this is what he wants--Severus' help. As well Harry does not seem mentally sable enough to do this and yet Dumbledore is forcing this by insisting on sending Draco to prison knowing Harry won't let him go--manipulating him yet again--and Severus is letting him!

    Very disappointed in this turn.

    Author's Response: Well, Draco was not going to be under a spell.  He was not actually going to be a slave.  He would have reluctantly agreed to serve at Prince Hall for a time to avoid a trial and prison.  I thought of it as a little bit similar to a 'community-service' type sentence.  Dumbledore has done other ethically questionable actions, but yes, it was a plot device.   
Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 6:54 am
Reviewer: le skrewt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oh please NOOOOO... I *love* this story, PLEEEASE don't drag Draco into their family!!! Why do so many of the really really good Severus/Harry-bonding stories have to add Draco? I don't particularly like the character (or any of his "fanon" personalities) and he is also a complete scene hog. And the usual course is that once Draco's living with Severus and Harry, eventually he becomes part of the family. As Severus' godson, and given Harry's squishy-soft heart, it's almost a given. Please, I'm begging you, don't do this.... :( :( :(

    Author's Response: Well, I did not plan for Draco to live permanently with Severus and Harry, nor for him to become part of the family.  
Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 6:51 am
Reviewer: Sisyphus (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad you're going with your own vision for the story - this is your story, no one else's! :) When you write the story that wants to come out, it will be much better than if you tried to write what would please other people.

    I'm very much enjoying this story and looking forward to where it will lead. Keep up the good work! :D

    Author's Response: Thank you.  I have always believed that too. 
Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 3:01 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Kristeh, don't listen to people who are obviously jealous and probably don't have as much talent in their whole body as you have in your little finger!!!

    I am so pissed that someone would have the nerve to leave reviews like that, especially to someone who is such a brilliant writer.

    DO NOT PAY ATTENTION TO THESE LOSERS!!!!!

    It was a brilliant idea to have Draco become Harry's slave. Let's see them come up with a story half as good. I bet that they can't even write anything a third of the quality of this story!!!

    You are one of the top writers on here, and this is one of the best stories out there, and you've got the awards to prove it!!!!

    Continue on with your vision and if anyone stops reading it, it's THEIR LOSS!!! Not yours!

    If they don't trust you enough to continue reading the story to see what you have planned before they knock it then they are IDIOTS!!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks again, Pandora!  I really appreciate your support!  One of the reasons that there was a longer wait between ch. 47 and this one was because I struggled a bit with the knowledge that the rest of the story, for various reasons, will not please everyone.  Of course everyone has a right to his/her own opinion and SC has, from the beginning, dealt with sensitive subjects.  It will continue to.

    Thanks again! 

     

Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad you're back. This idea seems interesting (draco slave), I can't wait to see where this goes. Can't wait for next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  There's still a good bit to play out so we'll see.... 
Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 2:12 am
Reviewer: Jazzy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I have loved this fic from the very beginning and think you are an excellent writer. However, between this chapter and the last it feels like something is missing. I had such high hopes for this chapter and unfortunately it didn't meet even the lowest of them.

    I am still debating with whether or not I will continue to read this fic, because this chapter aside the rest is so good.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your compliment, and for being civil.  I'm sorry if the chapter disappointed you.  All I can do is my best.  Whether you continue to read or not is, of course, your own decision. 
Title: Chapter 48 30 Jul 2009 1:14 am
Reviewer: hp4ever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What??? Make Draco Harry's slave? Sorry, but that has got to be the stupidest idea I have ever heard. And for Harry to even agree to it is soo unbelievable, it's absolutely ridiculous. This is the same boy who has been unable to deal with being a slave himself and who was just being all sympathetic towards Draco's hardship - and now we're supposed to believe that he thinks it might be a good idea to put Draco through the same thing he himself has had to go through??? And being Harry's slave is supposed to teach Draco a lesson? What a bunch of crap. Harry deserves to be with Severus alone to continue building their own father/son relationship and having Draco added to the mix by living in Prince Hall is horrible!!!

    Well, I definitely won't be reading this story anymore. I'm pissed that I've invested all this time in this story and it ends up with the same Severus/Harry/Draco trying to live together stuff just like most of the other storeis on this site, albeit with a 'different' twist. This story was very unique in the beginning and I am truly dissapointed in its outcome - God I wish you could have put some type of warning that it would end up like this beforehand.

    Author's Response: There have been plenty of warnings in this story.  Draco has been listed as a main character from the beginning.  Perhaps you should have considered that more carefully before you chose to read.  Of course you have every right to disagree my choices and to quit reading, but please do not try to make me feel guilty for writing my own story.  

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