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Title: Chapter 52 10 Sep 2009 2:55 am
Reviewer: nairobidawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great!!! I wonder why Draco feels like he must always be so naughty!!! Or did he know that was Harry's room? Was that room once Draco's? What is going to happen now? I hope Harry doesn't lose it completely.

    I also hope Harry comes to realize he is still a good catch, slavery spell or not!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, I don't want to spoil the next chapter, so I'll keep quiet about Draco's motivations for the moment.  Yeah, Harry's pretty close to losing it, in one way or another.  And yep, the time will come when Harry and Severus talk about girls, dating, and Harry's future.  I'm thinking some kind of holiday festival, perhaps a Yule Ball, or just a Christmas party or some such occasion when Harry might need a date would be a good way to bring all that to Severus' attention.  Thanks again!  
Title: Chapter 52 10 Sep 2009 1:23 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    uh-oh. Will it be fireworks or a breakdown?

    Great chapter.

    V.

    Author's Response: That's a really great question!  Thanks so much!
Title: Chapter 52 09 Sep 2009 11:43 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    kill the beast!

    okay, granted, i realize that you won't cull malfoy, but... one can dream, right? jk. great chapter, btw

    Author's Response: LOL!  Were you ever an extra in a Disney musical?  Thanks for reviewing. 
Title: Chapter 52 09 Sep 2009 9:31 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Kristeh, that was great. as usual.

    I feel so bad for Harry, but I'm glad that he has Severus looking out for him, and that Severus will always do what's best for Harry, no matter what. He really has grown and changed, hasn't he? The old Snape wouldn't care if Harry were happy or not, nor would he unselfishly put aside his own happiness for that of Harry Potter. But now, they are father and son, and I love the warmth and trust that they've developed.


    I've had the warm fuzzies, until Harry saw Draco standing in the doorway, now I'm worried over Harry's mental state!

    Ooh, I can't wait for the next chappie. I hope that they can all co-exist in the same house, without going crazy or killing each other!!!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Pandora!  I have had a wonderful time exploring Harry and Severus' relationship, how it has grown and getting them to this point. 

    >>>now I'm worried over Harry's mental state!

    Yeah, Harry is not at all pleased about Draco being in his room, and he is pretty close to his breaking point.    


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