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Title: Chapter 54 20 Oct 2017 6:19 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    So, a little of Draco's POV too?
Title: Chapter 54 22 Apr 2012 7:57 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't like how mean they all are to Draco. I wish Harry would offer to help Draco as well. But I love your story so far and I'm so very curious about where you'll go with it.
Title: Chapter 54 08 Oct 2009 8:54 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s good that Harry seems to be healing slowly but surely, although with you I suppose there’s every chance it won’t last ^-^ and I wonder if there is a reason I’m suspicious of Alec or if it’s just me naturally distrusting OCs? I like Draco’s slow progression to being a nicer person too, that last sentence put in my mind the image of a ferret coming out of a hole with shifty eyes, trying to puzzle out the situation ^^ and I loved the art analysis, you did that quite nicely ^^ (brought to mind all my year 12 art essays, was it fun to write or a pain?)
    Anyway, looking forward as always to the next chapter, I’m always going back to the start and rereading my favourite bits ^^ - definitely one of those fics that last ^-^
    Have fun and stay safe, hope life’s treating you well ^^

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your kind comments!  I'm so happy that you are enjoying SC.  Hmm, writing the mini-art essay was kind of fun...but only because it was part of the story.  I might not enjoy it as much if I had to write it for real.

    Poor Draco; he's never going to live that ferret thing down, is he, lol? 

Title: Chapter 54 07 Oct 2009 3:56 am
Reviewer: nairobidawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another great chapter!!! Harry has always amazed me with his constant desire to do good. He is such a mature, wonderful person for his age! Thanks for portraying him so well! This story is great, and I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  Harry is a wonderful person, isn't he?  I obviously love him, lol, and I'm so happy that you're enjoying the story still.
Title: Chapter 54 07 Oct 2009 3:05 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm proud of Harry. He's staying true to himself--and maybe Draco is learing a bit more of the truth about Harry as well--He's not going to start anything, no matter how "justified" it might be. All he ever wanted was to be left alone.

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy that you agree about Harry, and maybe Draco is slowly having his eyes opened.
Title: Chapter 54 07 Oct 2009 12:33 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay new chapter! I love how Harry wont allow anyone to pick on Draco, I like how he remembers what it felt like at the Dursleys and wont become like them, he is such a little sweetheart! :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Although Harry can recognize the differences in their situation, especially now that Severus pointed it out to him, I imagine he could still see some similarities and I just can't see Harry picking on someone, even Draco.   
Title: Chapter 54 06 Oct 2009 1:05 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    As usual Kristeh, wonderful chapter.

    I'm so pleased that Harry was able to visit with his friends, both at Hogwarts and at home.

    The tact that Severus is using in teaching
    Draco some humility, is brilliant. I love the little lesson, using Leonardo DaVinci's painting, "The Mona Lisa" as an example of how a Muggle can be brilliant. Draco's reaction was precious too, when he realised that a Muggle painted such a intricate work of art. I could just picture his expression too, when Severus showed him all the other works of arts by the talented artists that all happen to be Muggle.

    Harry is such a unselfish, kind boy isn't he? After all that Draco has put him through, he can still put his own feelings aside and rise above the inclination to taunt and take revenge against Draco; going so far as to prevent Ron from doing so. That's classic Harry Kristeh, and you've captured his personality to a "T".

    I'm so pleased that Harry's other friends, and classmates from school have been so supportive. I can't believe that they all signed the letter, encouraging Harry to come back. I really hope that he reconsiders, after things calm down a bit.

    I think that this is a really good lesson though; both for Draco and for Harry. It's sad that it takes a tragedy such as this though for Harry to learn how many people care for him, and would stand by him, but it must warm Harry's heart nevertheless.

    Well...what can I say Kristeh. You've written another wonderful chapter, that's left me yearning for more!!

    Please update soon. I can't stand the suspense.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much, Pandora!  You write wonderful reviews with so much detail and I really appreciate it.  I'm happy you like Severus' approach to teaching Draco.  As for Harry...well, you know how I love him, lol.  Well, the letter wasn't all the kids in the school, but it was all Gryffindor House and the DA.  I figure Harry probably is pretty well-liked by most of the other students...for sparing them from Voldemort and war, even if they don't know him personally.  I think that there would be a feeling of wanting to rally around one of their own with the Gryffindors, and of course the DA kids would be on Harry's side, I think.  Thank you again!  And I'm looking forward to your next chapter, too, for both stories!  
Title: Chapter 54 06 Oct 2009 8:48 am
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter xx

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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