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Title: Chapter 55 20 Oct 2017 6:36 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Was that a suicide attempt or really an accident? Though, I am pretty sure no one stabs themselves in the chest for suicide.
Title: Chapter 55 23 Feb 2014 8:14 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Did Draco try to commit suicide? If not, then Prince Hall is not very safe, is it?

    Did the Death Eaters put a curse on Draco when they were at his house?... Maybe a curse that kicked in on Halloween. Or is Draco depressed, like Harry has been? Or did someone attack Draco? So much to wonder. I am glad that I don't have to wait for an update.
Title: Chapter 55 22 Apr 2012 8:05 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That last scene was really good, I wonder what Draco did and why he didn't call for help. Dlsholdnt the 'oh dear god' have been ' oh merlin'?
Title: Chapter 55 02 Nov 2009 10:23 pm
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Perfect timing to catch Halloween. It's nice that you had Harry deal with the holiday in this way. Even though he doesn't really remember his parents, there's always that reminder of their death on Halloween, and I'd imagine Harry would feel sad regardless, especially as he got older and realized the horrors of war.

    Uh, oh for Draco. I can't help but wonder if it was really an accident or if it was an attempt by Draco to end the situation. I'm sure it'll be interesting whichever way you decide, and I look forward to reading it.

    Author's Response: Hi, Ella.  Thanks for reviewing.  Sorry I've taken a while to get back with you...both of our computers went down with viruses and we were computerless for a few days.  I've always thought that, as much as Harry missed his parents and thought of them, that it would be logical for him not to want to celebrate Halloween.  More on Draco in the next chapter.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 55 30 Oct 2009 9:28 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh my! poor Draco, I hope he will be okay, that was so good of Harry to get help for him, the lil sweetie :D

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, Harry's great!
Title: Chapter 55 30 Oct 2009 9:21 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh My! Was it an accadent or did Draco try to "do himself in" as it were? Well, Harry can surely relate to those types of feelings, now the question is, How did Harry preventing Ron's bullying of Draco lead to this event? I'm sure there is SOME connection.

    great Chapter!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Harry could certainly understand those feelings.  There will be more of Draco's condition in the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 55 30 Oct 2009 7:38 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!!!! How could you leave us with a cliffe? You naughty girl. I wasn't expecing that at all!

    Harry is such a good kid; caring about Draco, and taking care of him. I'm dying to know what happened to Draco though. I really hope that he's going to be alright. I feel so bad for him. He's got no one. At least Harry has got Severus, and he still is so young.

    I hope that Draco can have someone like Severus to take care of him and love him too.

    I simply loved the conversation between Severus and Harry. Poor Harry being worried that he was being weak for not wanting to return to Halloween. I really hope that eventually things will all work out, and Harry can finally have a normal childhood.

    I love how Harry looked up to the sky and asked his parents and Sirius if they approved of his relationship with Severus. I really believe that they would be happy for Harry to have found someone so protective and caring to watch over their son.

    Halloween will always be a painful time for Harry, but maybe one day, when the spell is reversed, then Harry can handle the holiday better.

    Lovely chapter Kristen. I'm so so anxious for another one though, especially since Miss Kristeh has left us with a cliffie!!!! I'l forgive you if you update real quick!!

    Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora!  It's always so rewarding to know what parts readers really liked or that meant a lot to them.  Well, with all of my computer difficulties lately, I can't promise how quickly the next chapter will be up, but I'll do my best.
Title: Chapter 55 30 Oct 2009 7:20 pm
Reviewer: nairobidawn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness, what a great end to the chapter! Did Draco try to hurt himself, or was it an accident? Please write more soon!!! I just love this story! I had a really bad day, and it was great to see this updated! Thanks so much!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, there will be more about Draco's condition in the next chapter.  I'm happy that you're enjoying it.
Title: Chapter 55 30 Oct 2009 5:52 pm
Reviewer: Aiwendil (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks for writing!
    I've not reviewed for quite a long time and my time's a bit low, but I just wanted to say that I really like this story and continue to do so. I hope that Draco and Harry can somehow reconsile (although I'm not sure if that's the right word as they've never been friends before), as I do like Draco and, for all he did, don't like to see him suffering. But then, a bit of a humbling experience should do his nature good.

    Thanks a lot,
    ai

    Author's Response: Thank you!   I hope that one day Draco might look back and think it was all for the best.

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