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Title: Chapter 56 23 Feb 2014 8:49 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am very interested in reading Draco's and Harry's conversation, assuming Harry will speak with Draco.

    I like that Draco has mostly been pushed to the side and has remained a minor character even though he, Severus, and Harry have been living at Prince Hall for several chapters now.
Title: Chapter 56 22 Apr 2012 8:27 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    To thank Harry? I wonder how Harry will react to that.
Title: Chapter 56 05 Dec 2009 4:27 am
Reviewer: Emmie J Sensei (Signed) [Report This]
    of course you end it there. grrgh. I knew it even before I seen the to be continued ...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try to update a little more quickly.
Title: Chapter 56 05 Dec 2009 12:11 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no a cliffie!!!!!!!!!! Great to be able to review, fanfic played up and I couldn't don't know why not I think it is my computer, your story is as great as when yoou started thank you so much for keeping up with your world so well.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm really glad that you think the story is still good quality...sometimes I wonder cause it is a long story and it seems like that can be hard to keep up sometimes.  Glad everything is back and working right for you.  We had some computer difficulties not long ago too. 
Title: Chapter 56 04 Dec 2009 1:56 am
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Gah!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!! ITS SO GOOD I WANT MORE!!!

    Anyway very well written. Good work.

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  I'm working on it asap!
Title: Chapter 56 04 Dec 2009 1:43 am
Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Signed) [Report This]
    oooo great chapter! worth the long wait :) but please update sooner *begging* what shall draco sayeth?

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy that you've enjoyed it.  I'm working on the next chapter, so hopefully it won't take as long.
Title: Chapter 56 03 Dec 2009 8:12 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow yay to updates! great chapter keep em coming :D

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll do my best.
Title: Chapter 56 03 Dec 2009 5:01 pm
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter can't wait to see what Draco says to Harry. This is going to be interesting. Love that Ron and Hermione made a visit in this chapter. Post soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll try.
Title: Chapter 56 03 Dec 2009 1:48 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, you are such a tease ^^ You always manage to write just enough to leave me positively squirming for more ^-^
    I hope Draco's not suicidal, as much as what happened to his mum and everything sucked I really wont be able to feel sorry for him if he wanted to off himself... At least he can find some guilt in him now over Harry (hopefully).
    Cant wait for another update (so very very demanding, sorry ^^)
    Have fun x

    Author's Response:

    >>>Oh, you are such a tease

    Sorry about that, but I think I could say the same to you, lol!  When are we going to see more of "Antonomasia?"  I know I've got to leave a review for the last chapter still.  Sorry about that, it caught me at a bad time and I've gotten behind on several stories.  I have to admit that I'm sort of skimming right now cause I can't bear for poor Harry to be in pain, but I'm so excited for Severus and Harry to begin reconciling.  I just can't wait!

    Thanks again! 

     

     

     

Title: Chapter 56 03 Dec 2009 5:33 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chappie Kristeh, as usual.

    I really wonder if Draco harmed himself. The thought actually is very disturbing that he would jab himself like that.

    I know that there is more to his story than meets the eye. I'm glad that Severus recognises that Draco needs counselling not necessary punishment right now. I believe that there is hope for Draco, if he gets the right kind of help, and someone that cares about him.

    Ron and Hermione are such good friends, aren't they? I love how Harry defended Draco to Ron though. I think that for Harry to truly heal and get on with his life, he needs to forgive Draco and let go of his anger and resentment, and feelings of worthlessness, or they will eat him alive.

    I can't wait to hear what Draco has to say to Harry. Well done Kristeh, as usual.

    I just love how you always capture the characters' feelings and the essence of the moment. You evoke such deep feelings , and I always feel that I can just imagine how the characters are feelings.

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Pandora,

    Thank you again for all your encouragement!  Draco has a difficult time admitting vulnerabilities, but then I suppose we all do to a degree.  Yes, Severus does want to be sure that Draco gets what he needs, though he doubts that he is the right person for the job now.  Of course Ron and Hermione are great friends...you know I love them, too!  Harry did take some important steps towards healing in this chapter, I hope that came across.  And thank you again!


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