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Reviews For Slave Child
I loved this chapter. Great work! V. Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, that's how I see Harry, too. Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, that's how I see Harry, too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter, but it will probably not be ready before the weekend. I know...it's always so hard to wait for a WIP. I hate it when I'm reading, lol! I try to update as often as I can, but real life does sometimes keep me busy, too. But I am very commited to SC. Thank you again!
Merry Christmas!!! Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you're caught up. I've been busy with family stuff and all lately, but I do want to work on the next chapter this weekend.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it, and you have a Merry Christmas too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think Draco is feeling badly inside...but he has a difficult time admitting it still.
Ugh, Draco. He's so emotionally frustrating. One moment you want to hate him for the words he spewed, and the next you're concerned for the boy. I'm curious to see what's wrong with him now. It doesn't sound like it was a simple nightmare. Great chapter, and I hope that really soon there'll be some progress made on freeing Harry. Author's Response: Thank you, Ella! And yes, you're exactly right...Harry did need some time alone with Severus. And yep, that's exactly how Draco is right now, but that's how I think he would be acting. He has a lot of emotions and feelings, and some changes going on inside right now, but he isn't quite ready to admit guilt and remorse aloud yet. But since SC is primarily from Harry's POV, with a bit of Severus, it may not be quite as obvious what's going on in Draco's head yet. It's been pretty difficult to write, but I think things will begin to change soon. As for freeing Harry, well...there have been guesses about that, and some people have been right. I only hope readers won't feel cheated about my plan, but it has been in the works for some time now.
Author's Response: Happy Holidays to you, too. Ah well, to each his own, as the saying goes.
Great chapter still, I do love the way you nail Harry's emotions every time and I love your fatherly Sev, I only hope I can get a nicer Sev right the way you have ^-^ And I hope you have a great christmas too! Author's Response: Hey, sproutchild! Well, it's not the best for Harry yet, but I do plan for things to get better pretty soon. As for Mr. Draco, well...I knew he wasn't going to come across as too sympathetic in this one, but his 'dramatics' are not because of his punishment or having to do some chores. He is traumatized because of his mother's death, his experience with Dolohov and Greyback, losing Severus and feeling all alone. But, being Draco, it's hard for him to show vulnerability or pain. He's lashing out, like a wounded animal right now. Also, his talk is defensiveness, because deep down he has realized that he did a horrible thing in casting that spell on Harry and telling the public...but again, it's too hard for him to admit his remorse and guilt yet. So he's being very defensive about it all. Anyway, I'm sure you'll do great when you begin showing Severus in a softer light in 'Antonomasia'...and speaking of that, lol, when do you think that might be? I literally can't wait! Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Aw, sorry about that...but now, I don't think I deserve to be called a Scrooge now, do I? I mean, the Grinch is sort of cute, in a hideous sort of way, lol...but Scrooge? Thank you!
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