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Title: Chapter 57 22 Apr 2012 8:41 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I really thought Draco wanted to apologize and then Harry would talk about his Suicide attempt. Maybe later they will. I wonder what Draco was thinking when he collapsed.
Title: Chapter 57 05 Jan 2010 3:49 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry is a good kid. He has a wonderful heart and does what is best--even if it isn't what he wants to do.

    I loved this chapter. Great work!

    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, that's how I see Harry, too.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, that's how I see Harry, too.
Title: Chapter 57 04 Jan 2010 11:24 am
Reviewer: regs (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter. Any idea when it will be up? Curious to what's gonna happen with Draco. Why, oh why, did I have to get hooked on a work in progress??? LOL! In all honesty, I'm loving the story though, and it's worth the wait on an update.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm working on the next chapter, but it will probably not be ready before the weekend.  I know...it's always so hard to wait for a WIP.  I hate it when I'm reading, lol!  I try to update as often as I can, but real life does sometimes keep me busy, too.  But I am very commited to SC.  Thank you again!
Title: Chapter 57 26 Dec 2009 4:53 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    And I am caught up! Whoo-hoo! You have successfully hooked me! I'm really looking forward to more, in which I'll be able to leave more detailed, well thought out reviews. Haha, all these chapters have jumbled my brain. ;-)

    Merry Christmas!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you're caught up.  I've been busy with family stuff and all lately, but I do want to work on the next chapter this weekend.
Title: Chapter 57 23 Dec 2009 7:59 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great scene between Draco and harry thank you for updating and Merry Christmas and a happy writing New Year

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it, and you have a Merry Christmas too. 
Title: Chapter 57 23 Dec 2009 6:13 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter, I think I was feeling vaguely sorry for Draco here, it must have been awful for him to lose the only person that really cared...if only that boy could repent lol

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I think Draco is feeling badly inside...but he has a difficult time admitting it still. 
Title: Chapter 57 23 Dec 2009 7:47 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad Harry got to spend some down time alone with Severus! He needed to be reminded that Sev loves him and really thinks of him as his son.

    Ugh, Draco. He's so emotionally frustrating. One moment you want to hate him for the words he spewed, and the next you're concerned for the boy. I'm curious to see what's wrong with him now. It doesn't sound like it was a simple nightmare.

    Great chapter, and I hope that really soon there'll be some progress made on freeing Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, Ella!  And yes, you're exactly right...Harry did need some time alone with Severus.  And yep, that's exactly how Draco is right now, but that's how I think he would be acting.  He has a lot of emotions and feelings, and some changes going on inside right now, but he isn't quite ready to admit guilt and remorse aloud yet.  But since SC is primarily from Harry's POV, with a bit of Severus, it may not be quite as obvious what's going on in Draco's head yet.  It's been pretty difficult to write, but I think things will begin to change soon.

    As for freeing Harry, well...there have been guesses about that, and some people have been right.  I only hope readers won't feel cheated about my plan, but it has been in the works for some time now.    

     

Title: Chapter 57 23 Dec 2009 6:38 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Happy Holidays. I have enjoyed the story up to the point where Draco is all of a sudden being made into a sympathetic character...it doesn't fit. He was much better off as the villain of the piece as it gave the story more balance.

    Author's Response: Happy Holidays to you, too.  Ah well, to each his own, as the saying goes.  
Title: Chapter 57 23 Dec 2009 3:58 am
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. This must be like some kind of warped psychological torture for him; I mean, I realise it's more the situation than any one person's fault but seriously, Harry's life doesnt seem to be getting any easier does it? And as awful as it sounds, Draco's coming across a little dramatic. It's not as though he doesnt deserve punishment and instead of being grateful to be with his godfather instead of azkaban he's suicidal and throwing hissy fits because he has chores now... and I'm probably coming across quite the bitch arent I? ^^
    Great chapter still, I do love the way you nail Harry's emotions every time and I love your fatherly Sev, I only hope I can get a nicer Sev right the way you have ^-^
    And I hope you have a great christmas too!

    Author's Response:

    Hey, sproutchild!  Well, it's not the best for Harry yet, but I do plan for things to get better pretty soon.  As for Mr. Draco, well...I knew he wasn't going to come across as too sympathetic in this one, but his 'dramatics' are not because of his punishment or having to do some chores.  He is traumatized because of his mother's death, his experience with Dolohov and Greyback, losing Severus and feeling all alone.  But, being Draco, it's hard for him to show vulnerability or pain.  He's lashing out, like a wounded animal right now.  Also, his talk is defensiveness, because deep down he has realized that he did a horrible thing in casting that spell on Harry and telling the public...but again, it's too hard for him to admit his remorse and guilt yet.  So he's being very defensive about it all.

    Anyway, I'm sure you'll do great when you begin showing Severus in a softer light in 'Antonomasia'...and speaking of that, lol, when do you think that might be?  I literally can't wait!

    Merry Christmas! 

      

Title: Chapter 57 23 Dec 2009 3:02 am
Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Signed) [Report This]
    argghhh... why so many cliffies???!!! And just before Christmas! You Scrooge! Grinch! Any other holidayish insult! But great chapter anyway :)

    Author's Response:

    Aw, sorry about that...but now, I don't think I deserve to be called a Scrooge now, do I?  I mean, the Grinch is sort of cute, in a hideous sort of way, lol...but Scrooge?

    Thank you! 

     


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