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Title: Chapter 57 22 Dec 2009 11:20 pm
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, things just keep getting better and better isn't it? And yes, i am being sarcastic.

    Author's Response: Well, you know they say the darkest hour is just before dawn!  Thank you. 
Title: Chapter 57 22 Dec 2009 7:43 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh Kristen, that was such an emotionally powerful chapter, and I don't know who to feel sorrier for--Draco, or Harry!

    I think that Harry is really mature beyond his years, and is really a selfless and compassionate person. For him to even be willing to talk to Draco, shows great stength of character.

    I believe that with Severus' guiding srength, that Harry will eventually be able to handle facing his peers and hopefully return to school eventually.

    I think that this time is important for Harry to heal, and for him and Severus to have time to really get to know each other, and although Draco is perhaps intruding on their time together, I think that maybe him being there, will be the catalyst for Harry to eventually forgive Draco, and be able to heal his emotional wounds.

    I feel terrible for Draco, but I hurt for Harry as well. I think that Draco just does not have the emotional capacity right now to really understand the ramifications of his actions.

    I love that Severus is such a tower of strength for both boys. He has really come a long way, and I'm very pleased that Harry has him now. In a strange sort of, very bizarre way, Draco is right. If not for the slavery spell, Harry and Severus would still hate each other, and Harry wouldn't have such a loving, caring father.

    It's a shame though, that the price is so high, but perhaps a reversal to the spell can be eventually found, and Harry can finally have what he deserves; a loving father, who truly cares for him, without having to endure the horrible slavery spell to have, what Harry should have had all along.

    Oh Kristen, you left us with a cliffie again!! I can't wait for the next update. Oh...and Happy Holidays, and take a well-deserved rest, and then please update soon, because I'm just dying to know if Draco is alright, and what the next crisis will be!

    Whew, I just can't stop chattering about this wonderful chappie. Brilliant as usual. Looking very forward to the next one.

    Author's Response: Thank you, Dawn, what a lovely review!  You have a great insight into what's going with the characters too.  Hope to see some more of your wonderful stories soon too!

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