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Title: Chapter 58 19 Jan 2010 5:32 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry. He's going to have to face the world eventually.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yes, he does need to face the world, but he just doesn't feel up to it yet.  But he'll get there eventually...
Title: Chapter 58 19 Jan 2010 2:59 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay new ideas tend to mean faster updates :D I do love this story and always look forward to seeing an update :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I am going to try to update more quickly, and I am excited about the ideas and the story again.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I am going to try to update more quickly, and I am excited about the ideas and the story again.
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 11:47 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good one!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 10:02 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was a great chapter! It was so sad to have Harry be jealous but totally understandable. I'm sort of wondering if maybe Severus really didn't send those tickets. Where is he anyway? Did he fall asleep in Draco's room?

    Author's Response: Thank you, OE!  Yeah, I think it would be hard for Harry to see Severus begin to warm up towards Draco.  He doesn't want to be jealous or to feel threatened, but he just can't help it.  Harry and Sev will talk a little bit more about the tickets in the next chapter, and don't worry, Sev's around.   

    Author's Response: Thank you, OE!  Yeah, I think it would be hard for Harry to see Severus begin to warm up towards Draco.  He doesn't want to be jealous or to feel threatened, but he just can't help it.  Harry and Sev will talk a little bit more about the tickets in the next chapter, and don't worry, Sev's around.   
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 7:58 pm
Reviewer: LaileeJane (Signed) [Report This]
    It was nice to see Draco acting human, and I feel so bad for Harry--things are just never easy for the poor kid. Another wonderful installment, I don't think you could write poorly if you tried!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  That is so kind of you to say.  I appreciate it and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 7:56 pm
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter and good portrayal of Harry's seesawing emotions.

    Author's Response: Thank you, and yes, Harry's emotions are swinging back and forth...he's really not as secure as he and Severus both thought, unfortunately. 
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 7:37 pm
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter, I like how this is going. You know what, I sort of imagine your writing style and set up similar to that of "AYLNO" by Aspeninthesunlight, that is high praise from me. Great job. :-D

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  And yes, that is high praise indeed!  I admire Aspen's saga so much; she is truly a genius. 
Title: Chapter 58 18 Jan 2010 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Harry's emotions are getting all tangled again. I'm so worried about him. He's assuming the worst again. He really needs to get over this "jumping to conclusions", and talk to Severus about his insecurities and feelings of jealousy over Draco; that's what a father is for--to talk over your problems. But since Harry's never had a father before (well...at least not since he was too young to remember) he's not comfortable relying on anyone.

    I am really beginning to feel the tug of sympathy for Draco. No one deserves to witness their mother being tortured, even Draco. He IS only sixteen...still a child.

    Oh, Kristeh, I'm so excited about the ideas that you have for this story, and I simply can't wait for the next update.

    Wonderful chappie as usual; chalk full of wonderful descriptions and vivid imagery. I just love your writing. ;)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you, Pandora!  Yeah, Harry does need to not jump to conclusions and have a long talk with Severus...but as you said, he's never had that security before and at the moment, he's feeling more upset and emotional than even he realizes, I think.

    I'm glad you're starting to feel sympathetic for Draco.  He has done some awful things, and maybe he still doesn't fully comprehend that...but he is learning to, and I do think that there is some good inside and he's worth saving.

    Thanks again; I'm really excited about the new ideas too, and think they should be fun to write. 

     


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