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Title: Chapter 59 20 Oct 2017 8:48 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry acts a little like a whiny idiot, but I guess it is normal for him to feel threatened. I dunno though, I never felt threatened with my brother, or maybe I did, cause I am almost always trying to make him look bad................
Title: Chapter 59 23 Feb 2014 10:13 am
Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think I know what's going to happen. Severus can adopt Harry legally now that they don't have to worry about keeping the slavery spell a secret anymore. I wish Harry wouldn't worry about Severus loving Draco more than him though.
Title: Chapter 59 22 Apr 2012 8:55 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great but I hope draco and Harry will start to get along.
Title: Chapter 59 08 Feb 2010 3:28 am
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 59 06 Feb 2010 2:41 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful interactions here! Possibly my favorite moment in fandom: "And no one insults my son with impunity, so unless you wish to disembowel frogs this evening, I suggest you refrain from doing so." Terrific! lol Loved it! And the conversation with Ron and Hermione, coming to Harry's rescue... YAY TEAM! :D

    Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  It's hard to write Sev as being kind and loving to Harry, but still having some snark to him, so I hope I did okay.  Thanks again.
Title: Chapter 59 28 Jan 2010 1:59 am
Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter!!! I can't wait for Sevvy's reaction :) gives me the warm fuzzies *snort*

    Author's Response: Thank you!  You can never have enough warm fuzzies, lol!
Title: Chapter 59 27 Jan 2010 11:37 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    You have set up a nice bit of angst her e thank you I liked the potion lesson nice that Severus is now so patient. Thank you for updating

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I really enjoyed writing that little snippet of a potions lesson to show how different things are now with Severus and Harry, so I'm really happy you liked that part.
Title: Chapter 59 27 Jan 2010 4:08 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yeah, thanks so much! I feel so involved in Harry's emotions in this story. I feel his angst and Severus' strong love and protection.
    I can't help but feel his jealousy towards Draco and his deep seated wish to have him out of the house while still feeling sorry for him.

    Author's Response:

    >>>I feel so involved in Harry's emotions in this story.

    Thank you; that is such a wonderful compliment!   I'm glad you liked the story.



    Author's Response:

    >>>I feel so involved in Harry's emotions in this story.

    Thank you; that is such a wonderful compliment!   I'm glad you liked the story.

Title: Chapter 59 27 Jan 2010 1:00 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Good job and I'm proud of how Ron and Herimoine are being!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I love Ron and Hermione and I've always thought the friendship between the the three of them was really special, so of course I had to show it in my story.  I'm glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 59 26 Jan 2010 1:32 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Yippeee!!!!

    Doing the happy dance that you've updated again!

    I always get so excited when I see that you've updated, and what a wonderfully emotional chapter it was. I'm so worried for Harry, and his emotional stability, but I really do think that his friends knocked a little sense into him. Especially Ron! He cracked me up with that line.

    I really hope that Harry follows through on his promise to talk to Severus; he's imagining all sorts of things that aren't true. He needs to talk to his father, who I'm sure will settle his doubts, once and for all.

    Great chappie, but then again, I expect no less from you!! I'm simply on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.

    I'm dying to see "the talk"!!

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Pandora,

    Thank you!  I'm always happy when you update too!  I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter. 

     


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