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Reviews For Slave Child
Brilliant chapter, btw. And it was just the right length--I'm leaving here just in time for work. Author's Response: >>>I want to hear them talk at dinner. Well, you just might get to in the next chapter, lol! Thank you, and I'm glad you made it to work on time.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm going to write this weekend.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, Ron and Hermione are great friends, aren't they? I think Harry and Sev will have some talking and working things out in the next chapter.
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Author's Response: Thank you! >>>I think he may be needing an extra long, extra big hug from his dad Sounds good to me, lol.
Especially loved: 'desperately trying to squash an anxious, hurt voice in his mind that put his greatest fear into words. I'm losing him. He'd rather be with Draco than with me.' That was the epitome of that feeling you get when you think you're going to lose someone important to someone else; very very well written ^^ And I'm more glad than I can say that Harry isnt like me - the whole time he's been troubled about this I've been thinking he should cut and run from the relationship with Sev before Sev does it to him - thank God your Harry is more persistent ^-^ And your writing really benefits from the direction you found in the way of future plot. *bows to your muse* (very glad it returned so spectacularly ^-^) Cant wait for more... but then, I'm usually just as impatient so dont rush or anything, I'm happy rereading this 'til there's more new stuff to throw myself into ^-^ Author's Response: Thank you! >>>And I'm more glad than I can say that Harry isn't like me-the whole time he's been troubled about this I've been thinking he should cut and run from the relationship with Sev before Sev does it to him... Well, Harry can't quite do that as the slavery spell would kill him if he tried to escape, after all. And it says that he has to live with Severus (for at least 9 months of a year), so running off just isn't an option there. But otherwise, Harry might be tempted. Thank you. I'm going to write again this weekend, but I don't know if I'll be able to get the chapter finished. I'll try though.
The situation with Draco is at a bad time for Harry. I know it's tough knowing that Draco is good at potions and has always had a relationship with Severus. While Draco really needs Severus right now, it's hard for Harry to realize that the extra attention is a necessity not a choice of Draco over Harry. I knew Hedwig would think of polyjuice or glamours. *Pats self on back* I'm glad that the quidditch tickets issue was at least addressed. That's one thing off Harry's shoulders. Great chapter, and I can't wait for more. Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, you've described exactly what's going on with Harry and Severus right now. They need to have a long heart-to-heart, don't they?
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Ron does have a way with words, lol! And yes, he and Hermione love Harry. Despite all the tragedies and difficulties in Harry's life, he is very blessed to have people who love him so much, too. |
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