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Title: Chapter 61 24 Feb 2014 7:24 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wonder how everyone will react now? Why hasn't Remus contacted Harry before now? Does he blame Harry for Sirus' death? How will Draco react to having a werewolf for a mentor and guardian? How does Remus feel? Will Remus even accept the offer to tutor the boys? Once again, I am glad that I don't have to wait for an update.
Title: Chapter 61 22 Apr 2012 9:10 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait for when Severus finds out that the boys are getting along. But, I really don't want tonks to come for some reason.
Title: Chapter 61 15 Mar 2010 8:25 am
Reviewer: Madge (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aaaand, there went my weekend! Well squandered time on my part! Keep the story coming, please!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, hopefully you managed a little time for other things, but I'm so happy you enjoyed the story.  Don't worry, there's still a good bit left too...I think SC is going to be quite a long story.
Title: Chapter 61 15 Mar 2010 5:15 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoy this fanfic; I've been reading it for a number of months and it keeps on getting better and better. I really like the way in which the plot has developed and your characterisation is very good.

    Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!  I really appreciate your comments and I'm so happy that you are enjoying it and thinking that it's still good.  With SC being such a long story, sometimes I wonder how the quality is holding up, so it means a lot to me to know that you think so.  Thanks again!  
Title: Chapter 61 12 Mar 2010 12:21 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I am with Draco over the choice of sandwiches and your other choice was not much better! Great chapter though thank you

    Author's Response: So no peanut butter and banana sandwiches for you, huh?  And you don't even like tomato soup either?  Hmm, maybe Draco will share some of his cavier and pate, if you ask nicely, lol.  Thank you!  
Title: Chapter 61 10 Mar 2010 2:44 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you liked it!
Title: Chapter 61 09 Mar 2010 7:40 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Darned!! I wrote a really nice, long review and then the internet here at work went down!!!


    Okay, so starting over...

    I loved it of course. I'm so glad that Severus and Dumbledore came up with the perfect solution for Draco, and that Draco and Harry are getting along.

    Harry is such a good, selfless person for not only forgiving Draco, but reaching out and being his friend.

    I think that Draco has the potential to be a good kid, but needs firm guidance, from a caring parental figure, and I think that Remus and Tonks could be very good for Draco.

    Draco and Harry both have many emotional issues, and are very needy, so they each need someone just for themseves.

    I can't wait to see the introduction of Remus in the story, and Remus and Snape trying to get along. This should be good.

    Oh...and I love Draco sticking up his nose at the peanut butter and banana sandwich (which is one of my favs by the way).

    I love that little banter betwee the two of them.

    I can't wait for the next chappie. As usual, you've left me wanting much, much more.

    Oh, and your descriptions are so vivid and make me feel like I'm in the room with them.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much, Pandora!  I hope it will be good for Draco, for them all.  And yeah, Harry's a great kid and I think being friends with him would have such a good effect on Draco.  And yeah, I think Remus and Dora would be good for him too.  Have to see where it goes I guess. 

    You're absolutely right that both Draco and Harry have emotional issues to work through...how could they not?  But they're getting there.

    >>>I can't wait to see the introduction of Remus in the story, and Remus and Snape trying to get along.

    Hmm, now did I say that Sev was going to try to get along?  Lol.

    Thanks again! 

      

      

Title: Chapter 61 09 Mar 2010 4:01 pm
Reviewer: Lillyko (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was so lovely! Draco was kind of cute, beeing so shy and afraid. I really like the boys Getting along.
    And I´d love to see Remus around. I really like him and maybe Severus can change his opinion about him to, once he gave him a chance. He is a bit jealous, that Harry likes Remus, isn´t he?
    I loved this chapter! Well done! Looking forward for the next!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy that you approve of Draco; he's starting to change.  I think he has potential and would like to see him become a better person.  I think being friends with Harry can only be good for him.  Yeah, Sev is likely a little jealous of Remus, deep down, because Harry was close to Remus first.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 61 09 Mar 2010 12:16 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay to updates :D cant wait to see if Remus agrees to this, im sure he will though hehe, if only to see Harry again :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I have a feeling Remus might agree, lol
Title: Chapter 61 09 Mar 2010 8:37 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Im glad draco and harry are starting to get togehter. Great chapter, please post soon!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Glad you liked it.  I'll work on chapter 62 this weekend.

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