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Title: Chapter 64 20 Oct 2017 4:56 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, he also is the git who just lost his mother in front of him after being tortured himself and seeing his mum get tortured. He is also the git who got rebuffed every time he went to Severus for help. He is also the git who was hurting.
    Well, when Harry was hurting, even he did say some and do some hurtful things to Severus, it's just that the magnitude of Harry's was very less compared to Draco's mistakes.
    I just didn't defend Draco. Who says I defended Draco? Err, I mean Malfoy?
    No, I didn't, anyone who says so will be strangled by me after I have strangled Drac- I mean Malfoy.
Title: Chapter 64 02 Mar 2014 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Thank you so much for sharing your work online; it is truly appreciated.
Title: Chapter 64 22 Apr 2012 11:58 pm
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that Draco and harry are still getting on well. I wonder what the next obstacle will be. My guess is that the deatheaters and fenrir find them but I'm not sure how yet.
Title: Chapter 64 13 Jun 2010 11:01 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Like this development with Draco and his remorse if it is that. Inevitably Harry is going to grow away from the other two if he is away from them.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  It is harder for Ron and  Hermione to understand.  Harry knows this but of course Ron's words still hurt and angered him.  They need to work it out, but their friendship is strong...Ron really was just being protective of Harry; he just wasn't very sensitive about it.  Thanks again.  I hope to have the next chapter finished in another day.        
Title: Chapter 64 08 Jun 2010 4:38 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! Ron the sensitive strikes again lol, the bit with Harry going to Draco was really sweet :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  LOL, yeah, Ron isn't always the most tactful person, is he?  He did mean well.  He is just very upset with Draco for harming Harry, and he isn't there to see how Draco is changing so it is hard for him to accept.  But he shouldn't have said such a hurtful thing to Harry. 
Title: Chapter 64 06 Jun 2010 12:53 pm
Reviewer: UltramarineQuest (Signed) [Report This]
    Go on, dear heart, go on!!!! When will 'next week' come??

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!  Well, I'm working on the chapter this weekend.  I  had hoped to write a bit while on vacation last week, but that didn't happen.  But I am hoping to get it finished within a few days.  
Title: Chapter 64 05 Jun 2010 5:40 pm
Reviewer: NotEvenHere (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, that was great! I really like how you write Harry. He's just a really good person. Made me sad though how he was thinking that Remus doesn't want a relationship with him. Made me all choked up. Awww... Draco was goo in this too, loved the werewolf angst. Thanks for sharing with us.

    Author's Response: Thanks, Tabitha!  I do love Harry and think that he's an awesome kid.  Remus does care for Harry, of course, but he has difficulties letting himself really get close to anyone.  I think he'd have self-esteem issues from being a werewolf, and even more he'd be afraid of opening up to someone after losing so many people he loved.  He definitely needs to work through these things.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 64 04 Jun 2010 9:09 pm
Reviewer: Arwen Evenstar (Signed) [Report This]
    my hunger is still not satisfied but its a great chapter. Hopefully you will update more often. I can't wait to see the relationship between Remus and Draco,and I wan't Harry and Remus to sort out their problems in a mushy dramatic scene. :)

    Author's Response:

    Oh, thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and I will try to update more quickly.  Yes, there's still lots to sort out, and there are still some dangerous characters out there as well, so still a lot can happen.

Title: Chapter 64 04 Jun 2010 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I really think that Harry is on his way to finally accepting his situation and healing. Well...he was until Ron opened his big mouth!

    Ron means well though; afterall, this IS Draco Malfoy we're talking about! I can't blame Ron totally for being suspicious of Draco's intentions and his "Paragram Shift", to quote Aspen's Snape! Draco and Harry have had a rather spotty past.

    I do like, however, like how Harry has seemingly forgiven Draco for past trangressions--or at the very least, he's seemed to put it all in the past, and is even finding it in his heart to let go of his resentment and hatred of Draco, and attempt to forgive him for casting the slavery spell upon him.

    I really like this new truce the two boys have, and I would love to see them become friends eventually; that is...if Ron can get past his grudge against Draco to give him a chance to prove that he has no mal-intent towards Harry.

    I fully understand Draco's fear of Remus, but I thought that Remus and Harry assuaged his fears, in a very sensitive and considerate way. I just hope that Draco can let go of his fears of Remus and give him a chance. The poor boy really needs a family, and someone who will be gentle and kind with him, and teach him a whole new set of morals--different from Lucius' predjudiced outlook towards those who are different, or non-magical.

    I especially enjoyed that little teasing between Harry and Severus. Severus' stern warning to avoid his usual dangerous stunts on a broom, coated in a teasing manner, was just too cute.

    Aw, I feel so bad for Harry that Ron spoilt his happiness by his hatred for Draco and mistrust.

    I can't wait for the next chapter. I really hope that Ron makes it up to Harry, and tries to be a little more supportive of Harry's decisions.

    Great chapter as usual Kristeh.

    Author's Response:

    Wow, thank you, Pandora!  Yeah, Ron means well, but yeah, he definitely could have been more sensitive.  But yeah, it's hard for him and for Hermione to really believe that Draco has changed so much because they haven't seen him.  And they are very angry and upset with Draco for all the harm  he has done for Harry.  They may not forgive that as quickly as Harry himself has done.  I'm glad you liked all those little parts.  They were fun to write, and I'm really looking forward to exploring Remus' issues, too.

    Thank you, and I can't wait for another chapter from you! 

Title: Chapter 64 04 Jun 2010 6:40 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Ugh...I just want to cuff Ron upside the head after reading this chapter. Great chapter as always, though. I loved how Remus responded and helped Draco understand that he's not Greyback. Very nice chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Well, Ron means well.  He and Hermione are very protective of Harry and are angry on his behalf.  Plus, they haven't been around Draco to see how he's changing and has been affected.  But yeah, Ron could have handled the situation better.  It wasn't a kind thing to say to Harry.  It will all work out in the end, but I thought we needed a little more conflict in the meantime.  Thanks again. 

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