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Reviews For Slave Child
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Kim! And yeah, Harry was feeling a bit stuck here. Glad you liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I think Harry is a very compassionate and generous person, and if canon Draco had felt remorse over his actions and had wanted things to change between them, I think Harry would have given him that chance so I wanted to have that happen here. Well, Ron spoke without thinking and hurt Harry with his words, which was wrong of him, but he wasn't intentionally being a prat. It's hard for him, and Hermione, to believe that Draco is changing without seeing it firsthand. Ron can't help but be suspicious and he's actually worried about Harry being hurt again. But he definitely didn't handle the situation in a good way. Yeah, Severus does feel nostalgic about Hogwarts, but he won't do anything unless Harry decides he's ready to return.
Looking forward to your next update! V. Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I think Ron has more potential than to just be an idiotic prat, so I wanted to show that he's trying to be a good friend, to make up for his mistake, and to see that someone is watching out for Harry.
Author's Response: Hi, Kim, Thanks so much! Yeah, I don't like Harry having troubles with Ron and Hermione either, but I do think that it would be hard for them to understand that Draco's changing, not until they've seen it firsthand. And with all that Draco has done, Ron and Hermione definitely have reason to feel suspicious and to be protective of Harry. The argument (if you could call it that) doesn't stem from them being angry, but from their great love and concern. And Harry knows it too, so I think the problem won't last terribly long. Yeah, Ron has grabbed the bull by the horns, so to speak. But he recognizes that Severus loves Harry and that Severus is in a better position to know what's going on and to keep an eye on things. Glad you liked the little dueling scene. It was fun to write.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. >>>I wonder if we are going back to Hogwarts soon? You seem to miss it as well as Severus! Lol, I guess I do, though I love Prince Hall too. But Severus and Harry do seem to belong at Hogwarts. However, there are still things that I want to have happen away from the school, too, so I'm going over my notes and trying to figure out the timing of it all. Thanks again!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Yeah, Severus is definitely feeling nostalgic. We'll have to see about Harry.
Author's Response: Thank you! Ron's come a long way hasn't he, lol? But he does know how much Severus cares for Harry and with Severus being at Prince Hall, Ron wants to know his opinion on Draco's change. I'll try to update again soon. |
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