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Title: Chapter 65 23 Apr 2012 6:23 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    It's weird that Ron contacted Severus and not Harry;however, I still love your writing. I hope something amazingly awful or wonderful happens soon. Such as the spell being broken or they're found by deatheaters which would bring people closer together. And cause a lot of angst--I have an obsession with angst.
Title: Chapter 65 07 Jul 2010 5:28 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sorry I'm late reviewing this. I always take too long to review when it really matters to me. I really admire your Harry. He's so good hearted and forgiving. He's stuck between old friends and new, a familiar place for many of us. I admire him for handling it so well. I really love your writing.

    Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Kim!  And yeah, Harry was feeling a bit stuck here.  Glad you liked it.
Title: Chapter 65 25 Jun 2010 3:20 pm
Reviewer: SunshineSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great job! I like the fact that Harry is starting to see another side of Draco and is compassionate enough to try and give him another chance. Of course, Ron had to be a prat about it. Lucky for Harry, he may be starting to see how badly he hurt his best mate. So, Sev misses Hogwarts, I wonder how it will affect things...

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I think Harry is a very compassionate and generous person, and if canon Draco had felt remorse over his actions and had wanted things to change between them, I think Harry would have given him that chance so I wanted to have that happen here.  Well, Ron spoke without thinking and hurt Harry with his words, which was wrong of him, but he wasn't intentionally being a prat.  It's hard for him, and Hermione, to believe that Draco is changing without seeing it firsthand.  Ron can't help but be suspicious and he's actually worried about Harry being hurt again.  But he definitely didn't handle the situation in a good way.  Yeah, Severus does feel nostalgic about Hogwarts, but he won't do anything unless Harry decides he's ready to return.     
Title: Chapter 65 23 Jun 2010 2:50 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful Chapter! And it looks like Ron is being mature for a change--what an amazing development!

    Looking forward to your next update!
    V.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah, I  think Ron has more potential than to just be an idiotic prat, so I wanted to show that he's trying to be a good friend, to  make up for his mistake, and to see that someone is watching out for Harry. 
Title: Chapter 65 22 Jun 2010 2:37 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi Kristeh! It's so sad to see Harry at odds with his friends. I think his friends are his greatest strength...next to love, that is. It was funny to see Snape trying to decide whether to step in and then be taken aback because Ron has stepped in. Loved it! The dueling class scene was great fun. First Dumbledore nearly gets it then Snape gets smiles and waves from Gryffindors? Priceless!

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Kim,

    Thanks so much!  Yeah, I don't like Harry having troubles with Ron and Hermione either, but I do think that it would be hard for them to understand that Draco's changing, not until they've seen it firsthand.  And with all that Draco has done, Ron and Hermione definitely have reason to feel suspicious and to be protective of Harry.  The argument (if you could call it that) doesn't stem from them being angry, but from their great love and concern.  And Harry knows it too, so I think the problem won't last terribly long. 

    Yeah, Ron has grabbed the bull by the horns, so to speak.  But he recognizes that Severus loves Harry and that Severus is in a better position to know what's going on and to keep an eye on things.

    Glad you liked the little dueling scene.  It was fun to write. 

Title: Chapter 65 20 Jun 2010 1:17 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for a quick update lovely to have another chapter. I wonder if we are going back to Hogwarts soon? You seem to miss it as well as Severus!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Glad you enjoyed it.

    >>>I wonder if we are going back to Hogwarts soon?  You seem to miss it as well as Severus!

    Lol, I guess I do, though I love Prince Hall too.  But Severus and Harry do seem to belong at Hogwarts.  However, there are still things that I want to have happen away from the school, too, so I'm going over my notes and trying to figure out the timing of it all.

    Thanks again!   

Title: Chapter 65 19 Jun 2010 12:45 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good one! But I really hope that Severus somehow convinces Harry to come back to Hogwarts. Like you wrote, they both belong there..

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you enjoyed it.  Yeah, Severus is definitely feeling nostalgic.  We'll have to see about Harry.
Title: Chapter 65 19 Jun 2010 12:12 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww thats sweet that Ron has made the effort to talk with Severus about his silly comment to Harry, looking forward to more as usual :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!  Ron's come a long way hasn't  he, lol?  But he does know how much Severus cares for Harry and with Severus being at Prince Hall, Ron wants to know his opinion on Draco's change.  I'll try to update again soon.

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