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Title: Chapter 66 20 Oct 2017 5:11 pm
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Tut Tut, Harry, you are making a mistake there.
Title: Chapter 66 23 Apr 2012 6:30 am
Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) [Report This]
    That's so sad that Draco is lonely and Harry doesn't notice. I wish someone would stand up for Draco more even though it may infuriate many other people.
Title: Chapter 66 23 Jul 2010 5:59 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Draco. What a dreadful place to leave it, too, you brat. Get to work!

    Sorry I didn't leave any reviews throughout the last twenty-some chapters. I was away at a 24hr shift with... inadequate 'net reception. >.< Loving it, though. Think I may go barmy waiting for upcoming chapters, though.

    Author's Response: Thanks again!  I'm really happy that you're liking SC.  I'm going to work on chapter 67 this weekend, so hopefully it'll be ready early next week. 
Title: Chapter 66 10 Jul 2010 6:09 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh! "The slavery spell," Harry said for him, ignoring the pang in his heart. - he's having heart pangs!!! Sorry, I've had too much sugar. But heart pangs!!! Everytime he thinks of the spell!!! That cant be good...

    Oh, I do hope this fic never ever ends... it wont will it? (because I'm so realistic when it comes to what I want ^^) - Im actually surprised Sev hasnt accidentally ordered Harry to do something that went undone and Harry was punished for... although if it reads intent... hmm... I think I'll keep my musing inside my head until it's, you know, rational (and legible ^^).
    x

    Author's Response: Oh, thanks again!  Well, I guess it'll have to end eventually, lol.  I'm not sure what I'll do with myself then either.  As for Harry being punished by the slavery spell, there is a reason why it's been dormant that will be explained eventually.  Hope it won't disappoint.
Title: Chapter 66 10 Jul 2010 5:58 pm
Reviewer: sproutchild (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Draco... although I always find it a tad hard to feel too sorry for him and no doubt Harry will befriend him further in his own time (or he'll find more of a friend in Remus than he realised)... and dont you just wanna hug Harry? This is like, as good as his life gets and he still gets reminded about the slavery and about Sirius... *hugs Harry... and Sev* (cos he's there and we dont want him feeling left out ^^) I love your Ron. Hermione too but your Ron... aww... really aww ^^. Ha, your Ron and mine should compare notes (I know I stashed him under my bed somewhere).

    Have to say I reacted to this update like I have since I started reading this - the last 30-40 chapters popped up in my inbox and I squee and get all chirpy and giggly and yay... ey... yayey...? Anyway, you are awesomeness itself and I can never wait for more but somehow I manage not to spontaneously combust between updates and Im sure I wont this time either ^^ Have fun and hope for more soon and yay, I'm gonna go reread it ^^
    x

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I'm sorry this has taken so long to reply.  I love that you love Ron...I love him too.  Despite his flaws, I think he's a good person and a good friend.  Thank you for the kind words...I'm really anxious for another Antonomasia chapter too!

     

     

Title: Chapter 66 08 Jul 2010 9:47 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved Ron and Severus and you almost made me feel sorry for Draco!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm so happy you enjoyed it, and you'll end up liking Draco after all if you're not careful, lol.
Title: Chapter 66 08 Jul 2010 9:06 pm
Reviewer: Dixie Darlin (Signed) [Report This]
    Really liked the scene between Ron and Snape. Keep writing, I love this story!

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy you liked it.  It was difficult to write, so I really appreciate that you enjoyed it.  Thanks again!
Title: Chapter 66 08 Jul 2010 4:26 pm
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter as always.

    I've always loved Draco and seeing him hurting and feeling so lonely really gets to me. I hope to see more draco/harry friendship.

    Thanks

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!  Well, things are getting better for Draco, but it will take some time.  There's a lot of damage to undo, after all.  But yeah, Harry and Draco's friendship will grow stronger, as will  his relationships with others, too.  Thanks again.

     

     

Title: Chapter 66 08 Jul 2010 1:55 am
Reviewer: lunaz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't know how you did but you having me feeling sorry for Draco! Great Story. Liked the Snape and Ron moment.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'll have some converted Draco fans yet, lol.  I'm glad you liked the Severus and Ron scene.  It was tricky to write; I bet I deleted, re-wrote, and edited a dozen times on that one part.  Thanks again.
Title: Chapter 66 07 Jul 2010 7:36 pm
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, Kristeh! I'm so glad Harry made up with his friends. He needs them so he doesn't fall into being even more isolated from the world. I do hope he rejoins society soon, but I know how hard it is for him with everyone knowing about the slavery spell.

    I still love that you always make me feel sympathetic for Draco. At the end here he just wants some friends, and he's the outsider. I hope things work out for him.

    Any progress on the slavery spell? I'm hoping Harry will be free sooner rather than later.

    Author's Response:

    Aw, thank you, Ella!  Yes, Harry does need his friends for lots of reasons.  Ron and Hermione were his first family and have been there for him at times when no one else was.  I'm glad you're feeling sympathetic for Draco.  I've always thought he had potential, and I really wanted him to achieve it here.  He's still got issues, definitely...witness his insecurity and jealousy of Harry's friendship...but he's getting there.

    I am debating the timing of the slavery spell resolution.  If I incorporate the sequel ideas into this story, I might need to change the timeline I had originally planned.  Or I might end it the way I have scheduled, and just write a sequel after all, though it might not be as long.  I keep going back and forth on which would be a better, smoother way of writing it all.  But I'll have to come to a decision soon.  Thanks again.  


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