Well, I understood Draco the Prat, but I was pleasantly surprised by Draco's pleading tone.
| Title: Chapter 67
| 03 Mar 2014 6:21 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I like this chapter; I think it's realistically written.
That was a great scene. I love when Draco and Harry talk things out. Of course now dracos going to feel really guilty for making Harry hurt himself. I hope that the Spell is lifted at some point. It will be, right?
| Title: Chapter 67
| 18 Aug 2010 5:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Lillyko (Anonymous)
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Wonderful chapter! I´m happy the boys get along and it´s wonderful to see their friendsship start to grow.
Harry tries to help draco, I hope the little snakling won´t give up helping harry as well. they´ve been trough a lot...
wonderful chapter, thanks so much and more please
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I've enjoyed writing the developing friendship between the boys too, so I'm happy that you're enjoying it.
| Title: Chapter 67
| 13 Aug 2010 5:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting and IC with Draco in this chapter thank you
Author's Response: Thank you; glad you think so! I wasn't sure how it would go over.
Thanks for the update! I hope the next chapter arrives soon... (hint) :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 68 is up now. Chapter 69 may be a couple weeks as I've just started teaching again and it's a busy time at first. But I'll get to it asap.
Ahh good to see an update here :D
I really liked Draco in this chapter; you've evolved his personality beautifully and really brought out the sensitive side we only see glimpses of in the canon. It's very natural for him to want to 'put the boot in' first, rejecting Ron and Hermione so they can't reject him. Well written, interesting chapter with realistic dialogue and lots of interesting threads.
Author's Response: Thank you! That's a really interesting point, Morgana, about how Draco would not want to risk being rejected so he would do it first...and one that I think is very true for Draco's insecure state of mind right now.
It would seem our boys are really starting to trust one another, huh? Tis a long, slow process, but I've a feeling...
Good chapter. Wish it was longer, but I guess I'll forgive ya. ;) Here's hoping for more, soon!
Really great chapter! Draco was both an arrogant brat and an insecure little kid, very realistic for a kid his age. I enjoyed the back and forth a lot. Wonderful!
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