| Title: Chapter 68
| 03 Mar 2014 6:53 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Awwww. That last scene was so cute. I would think that someone would notice a new kid hanging out with Harrys old friends. I wish that Severus and Harry would treat Draco as less of a servant even though that's his punishment.
Nice chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thank you again for all the lovely reviews!
I love this story, I always have. I just wanted the chapters to build up before I started reading again. I have two questions: Will Harry be released, and how deep a relationship will he and Draco have? Kudos on several well written chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I don't want to answer you here, for spoiler reasons. If you really want to know the answers to your questions, let me know and I'll send you a PM.
I really love how Snape and Harry can talk and Harry is able to bring his concerns about the slavery spell to Snape without fear of being ridiculed. And how he can tease Snape, and report fears for his friend, all without fear of being belittled or rejected. It's a lovely family scene you paint and so satisfying to look in on. I can't wait to see how the Yule Ball plays out. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, Kim! Yeah, Harry and Severus are very close by now and I love writing their scenes, too, so I'm really happy you enjoy them. I'm excited about the Yule Ball too.
| Title: Chapter 68
| 26 Aug 2010 1:01 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter I wondered when this issue would come out in the open very sensitive handling of it. Who will he take? I hope not Ginny
Author's Response: Thank you! To be honest, I haven't decided for sure who Harry will take, precisely because I know some fans have strong feelings about ships. Personally, I don't. I can enjoy Harry with almost anyone, if it's well-written, but that also may be because I'm just not a strong romance fan and so I don't have strong feelings about any ship. We'll see...
Aww how sweet :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Goody! So it's been updated! FINALLY!
Gr8.........wish u write more soon...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Aw..! Cute chapter. Shorter than I should have liked, but I don't any of your chapter would be "long enough". ^^ Just kidding. Well... mostly.
As always, nicely done - looking forward to what happens next.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm really enjoying your story too.
| Title: Chapter 68
| 24 Aug 2010 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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A sweet chapter, but I am wondering if you have plans for bringing Harry and Severus back to Hogwarts and lifting the spell? Though of course going to the ball seems like a step towards it, but I really hope to see some more development in the story!
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, the emotional development of the characters has always been a main emphasis of the story, so I think the growing friendship between Harry and Draco has been important. It's been crucial to have them be alone at Prince Hall in these early stages, as I think it would have been harder for that to come about at Hogwarts, if they were surrounded by others. Going back to the ball is also a crucial part of the story. As for the slavery spell, it will be resolved in time.
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