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Reviews For Slave Child
I'm so glad Harry will get to go to the Yule Ball and spend some time our in the "real world." He needs to break his isolation and not forget that there's a wonderful world out there full of wonderful people (and girls like Severus said) that's waiting for Harry to experience and explore. He may currently technically be a slave (I still believe there'll find some way to free him soon) but he's really only a slave if he allows himself to feel like one, especially in Severus' eyes. I loved the fluffiness at the end. It shows just how far Harry and Sev have come in their relationship and how comfortable Harry is feeling with having Sev as his father. Author's Response: Thank you, Ella! Well, the slavery spell is always an underlying issue through the story. Sometimes it's more in the spotlight than at other times, but it is always in the background. Things will be resolved at some point, but not just yet. Yes, Harry really does need to get back out into the world, and if using polyjuice potion is what he needs to take the first steps, then Severus is willing to help him out there. And yes, Severus never regards Harry as a slave and he doesn't want Harry to see himself that way either, but he does recognize that it's difficult for him. And yeah, they've come a long way, haven't they? Looking forward to another chapter for you!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Harry still struggles with the spell, more so at times than at others, but Severus is there to help and comfort him.
Aw, poor Harry. I never imagined that he'd think so far ahead to what would happen if he married and had chilren, but I suppose that it's normal. I wish so much that Dumbles would find a way to reverse the spell, and then Harry and Severus could truly be free to be a normal father and son. I wonder if Harry "does" attend the ball with the Polyjuice, if he'll eventually feel brave enough to show his real face, and accept that so many people support him. I'm glad that you're mum and dad are settling in their new place nicely Kristeh, and I can't wait for the next chapter, and the "Ball". I'm very curious as to who Harry will become. Will Severus attend as a chaperone? I know that he dearly misses stalking the halls, and handing out detentions. LOL! :) Author's Response: Thank you, Pandora! I really appreciate all your help and support. You and Kim are a big help to me. I'm so glad that the bond between Harry and Severus is so real now. For all the hardships and abuse they've both suffered, they deserve to have that close bond, someone who is always there to love and support them. I don't think the marriage situation is entirely 'real' to Harry...as I said, he sees it as something that is so far in the future that it's difficult to comprehend, which is pretty normal at sixteen, I think...I hope. But it is something that he has thought of in an abstract sort of way, if that makes sense. >>>I wish so much that Dumbles would find a way to reverse the spell, and then Harry and Severus could truly be free to be a normal father and son. Now who said that DD would have anything to do with it? Patience, my dear, patience...all in good time, you know. >>>Will Severus attend as a chaperone? I know that he dearly misses stalking the halls, and handing out detentions. Lol! I imagine Severus will be there, too.
Thanks, Pandora!
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, I'm not sure about showing the Severus and Draco scene...probably not, but if someone ever wanted to write some little side scenes from SC, I'm agreeable to that.
Lovely--warm fuzzies runing all over the place! :-) V. Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Harry does still have some issues. I think Severus has helped, but Harry was abused by the Dursleys for all his life and that kind of damage takes time to heal. And yes, the spell doesn't help, certainly. |
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