No, Harry is having a pneumonia induced nightmare, isn't he? Please tell me he is! Oh god, please! No, that can't be!!! That just isn't. It can't be happening.
Oh god! No! No! No!
I dunno, Severu cried for the first time in years, that was sweet. Even my heart shattered when Harry asked if Severus really forgave him. You know what, I really think that it serves Harry right after suffering from pneumonia, he shouldn't have gone off, he should have known that Severus would think only of his well being. He should have known and he should have had told the others so too, especially people like Seamus.
I really don't like it. I really really don't like it. Of course I like your story, I really don't like the fact about what Harry is doing, a suicidal Harry is almost better then this one, almost. I don't even want to read it, but the curiosity is getting better of me. I hate Harry for doing this, for going to play, and I hate Severus for doing this, for not allowing Harry to play. Arrrghh! I haven't even read the full chapter.
Tut tut, Harry is getting a bit pissed of, isn't he?
Poor Harry and poor Severus, I know Severus wants what is best for him, but it is hard to see Harry not playing Quidditch. It is also hard to see Harry hurting Severus with his words,I also don't like it when Harry refers to himself as Slave, it just isn't right. Slaves and Masters don't go around telling each other 'I love you.'
Any idea what is getting Harry so pissed of? First when he couldn't do the non-verble spells the first time around and now this.
Something is definitely wrong with Him, of course. Malfoy, that is.
Author's Response: Oh yes. Definitely.
I suppose that Severus agreed to go to Prince Hall in the end?
I am excited to find out what is wrong with Malfoy. If Voldemort was still alive, I would have thought that he was going to be initiated against his wishes.
Author's Response: No, not that, but Draco definitely had a rough summer.
Hm-Hm, this chapter was nice, well as I already said, the Slavery Spell is quite slack, but I didn't want it too hard either, I just like a Harry in pain, not a Harry humiliated, what ever, I know it is a bit strange.
Author's Response: Thanks! I was more interested in exploring the emotional aspects of the slavery spell.
There is too much fluff, don't you think? Like, Severus hugging Harry almost twice every day, my father hugs me maybe once every year, you know. But, well, I don't have much problem with it except for the fact that it looks OOC.
Author's Response: Yea, I think you're right--a bit too much fluff, but oh well, the fluffier, the better, sometimes at least.
Never mind, I got my answer to the previous review. Harumph, Harry overthinks a bit, doesn't he? He just forgot to leave a simple note, he even said sorry even then he thinks that Severus would leave him? Of course I know that he has a low self esteem, but of man, that was pretty pathetic, even for Harry, who seems to be an all time low in this story.
Author's Response: Yes, Harry might be at an all time low, but hey, I had to try to keep some drama going, didn't I?
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