| Title: Chapter 56
| 23 Feb 2014 8:49 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I am very interested in reading Draco's and Harry's conversation, assuming Harry will speak with Draco.
I like that Draco has mostly been pushed to the side and has remained a minor character even though he, Severus, and Harry have been living at Prince Hall for several chapters now.
| Title: Chapter 55
| 23 Feb 2014 8:14 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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Did Draco try to commit suicide? If not, then Prince Hall is not very safe, is it?
Did the Death Eaters put a curse on Draco when they were at his house?... Maybe a curse that kicked in on Halloween. Or is Draco depressed, like Harry has been? Or did someone attack Draco? So much to wonder. I am glad that I don't have to wait for an update.
| Title: Chapter 48
| 23 Feb 2014 6:05 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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Okay, this is my problem---- I have been reading this story for 48 chapters. So far this story has been exactly what I signed up for. Harry and Snape have slowly and wonderfully developed a genuine father and son relationship. Let's keep on with that theme. Why in the world are you throwing Draco Malfoy into the mix? If I wanted to read a Harry and Snape have a father/son relationship and, oh yeah, Draco Malfoy is there too type story then, I would reread A Year Like None Other, which I like, btw. However, I do not want to read that again, I want to read a different story. I understand that if Severus deserves redemption, then so does Draco--- I get that. But, and this is a big fat BUT, that is not the type of story I was led to believe that I was reading. It is a bit like bait and switch. As I said, Draco deserves a chance--- totally. BUT, and I cannot stress this enough, I do not want to read chapters and chapters about it. Been there, done that, it's called AYLNO. I want to read about Harry and Snape. It's okay for Draco to be in the story, of course. But, I am not looking forward to seeing him become a main character. I feel very let down. :( :( :(
| Title: Chapter 47
| 23 Feb 2014 5:27 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I wonder if Dumbledore and Snape will press charges against Draco. I bet they won't. I bet this turns into a saving Draco from himself type of story... with everyone making Draco see the error of his ways and helping him realize how wrong he was, blah, blah, blah..... boring, boring, boring. I hope it doesn't turn into something like that. I think he should be charged and punished. Oh well, I guess that's not going to happen. :(
| Title: Chapter 43
| 23 Feb 2014 3:38 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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Why does Harry have to play the slavery spell card every single time he has an argument with Snape?
| Title: Chapter 42
| 23 Feb 2014 3:19 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I am still enjoying this story.
| Title: Chapter 36
| 19 Feb 2014 4:41 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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Ah, I wonder what is going on with young Mister Malfoy? He is acting particularly strange. I am intrigued.
Author's Response: Lol, yes, Draco is acting mysteriously, isn't he? Thanks!
| Title: Chapter 31
| 18 Feb 2014 5:10 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I'm looking forward to seeing how things go for Severus and Harry now that they are back at Hogwarts. I adore how protective Severus is towards Harry.
Author's Response: Thank you for all the kind reviews! I really appreciate it!
| Title: Chapter 29
| 18 Feb 2014 3:14 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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I am enjoying these father-son type interactions between Severus and Harry.
Author's Response: Thanks! I loved writing those scenes too.
| Title: Chapter 20
| 17 Feb 2014 2:48 am
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| Reviewer: Anne (Anonymous)
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Wow!! My heart was racing the entire time. You did such an amazing job with this chapter. It was quick, lightening speed, yet also very clear and easy to follow. I know you say that it is difficult for you to write action sequences; but, if you had not said so in the writer's notes, I would never in a million guess that. Fantastic chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I do remember that chapter being very difficult to write.
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