Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Christmas Party 13 Mar 2024 7:17 am
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]

    I'm so sorry for not reviewing on earlier chapters! As a writer myself I know how reviews can keep you motivated. But your story was such a page turner! I just clicked the next chapter without reviewing because I wanted to know what happened next. I liked the story very much! Your writing is excelllent and the evolving relationship between Harry and Snape is so well done! It's not rushed or anything it's just perfect! Thank you so much :) I also enjoyed your description of Occlumency and the talks they had in each other's minds.

    I'm sad to see that this story wasn't updated for so long and I don't know if you're still around. Let me just say that I'd love seeing this updated but even without further chapters this story is awesome!

Title: The Christmas Party 25 Jan 2022 12:49 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you continue this one day! I truly enjoy your writing.
Title: Legilimency 25 Jan 2022 12:44 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter
Title: Lending a Name 25 Jan 2022 12:40 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It was nice to see some of the other characters in this chapter.
Title: Lending a Book 25 Jan 2022 12:37 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It worked! Harry’s reaction felt real and tangible.
Title: Lending a Hand 25 Jan 2022 12:31 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter, from the broomstick scene to the quiet brewing!
Title: Lending a Wand 25 Jan 2022 12:24 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the changing relationship feels natural enough to fit the story. I loved the last part of the chapter!
Title: Lending an Ear 25 Jan 2022 12:19 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, Snape is closing in!
Title: Parlor Trick 25 Jan 2022 12:14 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s gratifying to see that Harry is starting to trust Snape. I appreciated another inside look at your view of how occluding works.
Title: Walking on Eggshells 25 Jan 2022 12:09 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter

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