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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Lending a Book 25 Jan 2022 12:37 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It worked! Harry’s reaction felt real and tangible.
Title: Lending a Book 03 Mar 2015 10:40 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I felt it was an appropriate gesture for Snape to make. A good way to thank Harry while acting as if he were rectifying an error. Harry was certainly touched and is also aware that the things from his parents' home will be available to him.
Title: Lending a Book 13 May 2011 6:40 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you're doing a fantastic job of characterization.
    I went back and reread b/c I'd missed several updates. Gonna add to my faves to not miss any more.
    I love how Snape is slowly opening up, as is Harry. Awesome job!

    Author's Response:

    Oh, wow, I'm flattered. Thank you!

    ~Aethyr

Title: Lending a Book 11 May 2011 6:05 pm
Reviewer: Caecelia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, excellent chapter! you succeeded wonderfully in capturing Harry's level of want by showing, rather than telling -- that brief memory of the Weasley's told more than any mere description of want ever could. I also particularly enjoyed your representation of Lily's marginalia. Snape's restrained, yet unmistakeable empathy was well done -- not too mushy at all! I am so glad for this update, and can't wait to see where you take the story.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your kind words, and your faithful reviewing!

    ~Aethyr

Title: Lending a Book 11 May 2011 3:32 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm glad to see that you updated. I liked how Professor Snape gave Harry Lily's book. Book titles should not be in quotation marks but italicized or underlined.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, yes. I'm a journalist/journalistic editor, so sometimes some AP style slips in. Thanks for the catch!


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