Title: Legilimency
| 22 Jul 2011 8:54 pm
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Reviewer: caecelia (Anonymous)
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Good chapter - I'm so happy to see that this excellent story continues to be updated. I was glad of Harry's outburst after Snape's sneaky tactic - it seemed very IC of him to yell and imply that Snape had no understanding of his plight, and for Snape to become frigid and turn away. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I'm glad that particular interaction worked; I'm really trying to strike a balance between the gradual friendship (it's certainly more complicated than that, but I think "friendship" is probably the best word) that the two of them develop and the friction innate to their very different personalities. It's hard!
Thank you, as always, for your review.
~Aethyr