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Title: The Christmas Party 13 Mar 2024 7:17 am
Reviewer: Nemo (Signed) [Report This]

    I'm so sorry for not reviewing on earlier chapters! As a writer myself I know how reviews can keep you motivated. But your story was such a page turner! I just clicked the next chapter without reviewing because I wanted to know what happened next. I liked the story very much! Your writing is excelllent and the evolving relationship between Harry and Snape is so well done! It's not rushed or anything it's just perfect! Thank you so much :) I also enjoyed your description of Occlumency and the talks they had in each other's minds.

    I'm sad to see that this story wasn't updated for so long and I don't know if you're still around. Let me just say that I'd love seeing this updated but even without further chapters this story is awesome!

Title: The Christmas Party 25 Jan 2022 12:49 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you continue this one day! I truly enjoy your writing.
Title: The Christmas Party 30 Jan 2016 5:39 pm
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantastic:)
Title: The Christmas Party 27 Dec 2015 10:51 pm
Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ARGHHHHHH !! This is wonderful, it's so beautiful and the story flows so smoothly, it's p.e.r.f.e.c.t.i.o.n. It makes me feel so warm and fuzzy inside but at the same time it leaves me intrigued. A+++++ writing, I hope you can update soon.
Title: The Christmas Party 05 Nov 2015 5:36 am
Reviewer: aurtrina (Signed) [Report This]
    Hello! Enjoying the story so far and looking forward to your next update whenever that may be ...
Title: The Christmas Party 12 Apr 2015 1:58 am
Reviewer: sshpfanfiction (Signed) [Report This]
    I suppose this has been abandoned, but I just wanted to write you and tell you that I really enjoyed it thus far.

    My only critique would be to increase the pacing a little bit.

    The characterizations were wonderful though. I especially liked your Luna. If you every decide to continue writing this, you'll have a reader in me :).

    Hope you are well otherwise.
Title: The Christmas Party 05 Mar 2015 12:22 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the way you paralleled the book in your story. Too bad it was never finished. I would have been interesting to see how or if Harry would have reconciled Snape's killing Dumbledore or if it would have even happened.
Title: The Christmas Party 07 Aug 2014 5:11 pm
Reviewer: crotia (Signed) [Report This]
    I really enjoyed your story
Title: The Christmas Party 16 Dec 2011 6:20 am
Reviewer: squeegybug (Signed) [Report This]
    This is one of my favorite stories. All that hard work at building trust is going to blow up when Snape kills Dumbledore! Or maybe this story isn't going that way... just letting you know someone is reading and appreciates your hard work.
Title: The Christmas Party 01 Dec 2011 8:00 pm
Reviewer: Dreaming Angel Spirit (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your story very much, perhaps because it follows canon. That's the thing I liked most about this chapter.
    Please keep writing and updating, as I long to read on ;)

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