Oh, I loved how you mixed canon in with your new storyline - it was quite seamless and delightful. Thank you as ever for your attention to small details - Hermione's embarrassment, Luna's unexpected perceptiveness, Snape's precise syntax. I would have loved to see more interaction between them - the transition between Harry's instinct to kill Snape and his decision to trust Snape was perhaps a bit rushed. I was also unsure how Snape was really wandless - even though his wand was out of sight - as Harry hadn't actually disarmed him. Anyway, I'm so pleased to see that you're still updating this lovely story, and cannot wait for more. Good luck with your coursework!
I love how you are slowly breaking down Harry's mistrust in Snape, although I'm getting worried about what will happen on that day.
Please write more.
I hope for Harry and Severus to know which side each stands on when that day happens.
Quite the enjoyable chapter! Well worth the wait! :-)
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