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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Princes of Slytherin
Author's Response: You wouldn't be the first person to have reviewed multiple times, but you will probably be the first to review every chapter, if this keeps up. And I would much rather multiple reviews than none, so by all means, keep going! Thank you for all your kind words. I do so try to keep everyone in character.
Scorpia
Eaglery awaiting more. :-)
I must say that I am curious whare it is leading. I have not seen too much typical events so I look forward to read your story. I appreciate that you start the way you did, thare are too many stories that the first few chapters are rich in Potter's history and just make me bored. But your story just make me want read more and more. I was disappointed it had only one chapter so far. But I think it will be "mended" soon. Story flow smooth and make an interesting reading, I will gladly read next chapters. I'm not native speaker so I cannot say about grammar, but I suppose it's alright. The thing I really enjoyed? The way Snape behaved after learning that Harry cried. It showed that Snape indeed had a heart (or was not immune to human feelings). But on the other hand he was not so soft as to hug Harry. You kept balance and it is thing to admire. I do not know why, but it was the thing that said: "It is going to be a good story". And I do not agree with Malora. I really liked your POVs. It show things that makes story more... impartial? We did not know what Snape think, but we did know that he really thought something. Waiting for more, Viper PS. I know that my english is horrible, but I couldn't help but comment. Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I am glad you like my Snape. I prefer him in-character in fanfiction, myself. You're right, he's no softie! Pax vobiscum, Aethyr P.S. Out of curiosity, where are you located? |
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