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Title: Stakes 24 Jan 2022 9:39 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I’m glad they’ve realized one of the true points of the lessons.
Title: Stakes 03 Mar 2015 3:59 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Trust Hermione to check out the books about occlumency and give Harry and Ron the Cliff Notes version. Snape seems like he is less antagonistic so perhaps he is trying. Looking forward to finding out more.
Title: Stakes 21 Jul 2011 1:28 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha, love your Ron. :D totally.
Title: Stakes 04 Jun 2011 1:39 am
Reviewer: Badgerlady (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is interesting and well written. Just one copy editing niggle: the traditional phrase of approbation is "Hear, hear!" not "Here, here!"

    Author's Response:

    Ack, I knew that! *smacks self* Thanks for the catch!

    ~Aethyr

Title: Stakes 28 Jun 2009 6:08 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was perfect. You are really gifted at expressing the character's emotions. On to the nxt.
Title: Stakes 19 Jun 2008 5:55 am
Reviewer: Scorpia (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your titles, there short, blunt and seem kind of cold. They can give you shivers, tell you that this is a good story. Long chapter titles are messy, and don't look amature. Your story is very well written, I suggest that you leave them as they are or change it so that there just titled chapter one and two. A good name for chapter two if your looking for something that's longer, how about 'What's At Stake'? The scene when they were talking about Harry's cubouard made me excited. I hope to see more chapters soon!
Title: Stakes 01 May 2008 11:17 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this fic is shaping up to be a good one, harry needsa to learn to trust snape, i know it will be dificult and trust goes both ways, but if harry is the bigger man, maybe snape will play the part to and somehow meet in the middle
Title: Stakes 08 Apr 2008 5:17 pm
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) [Report This]
    Very exciting chapter! I hope there is an update coming soon :) I just love the way you portray Snape and Harry too of course, but Snape is always the hardest to do a god job on.
Title: Stakes 05 Mar 2008 2:02 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is looking to be a really good read. It seems you've put alot of thought into this story, you've done a good job in making it believable and realistic. The characters sound well in character and the emotions are done beautifuly, you can really understand how Harry is fealing about everything. Excellent job, I'm into this story so I truly hope you will PLEASE post again soon!

    P.S. Since you mentioned this story is AU, is it safe to assume the character deaths Rowling made will be forgotten? I sure hope so.

    Author's Response:

    I'm so glad that the readership is enjoying my story. I will try to post as often as I can, but it is unfortunately not as often as I would like. In Real Life, I am in high school, so homework and extracurricular commitments get in the way.

     My story currently follows canon. It will go AU after book 6, so all character deaths from Half-Blood Prince still hold. As per my Story Notes, the deaths following book 6 are based upon my predictions from before Deathly Hallows was released.

    Pax vobiscum,

    Aethyr 


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