I like how Snape maneuvered Harry into giving the information he sought, though I hope it leads to a change in approach!
Well, there went any hope of trusting each other. They seem to be at an impasse. Maybe Harry will make out better with the texts for now.
Snape becoming detached and formal at the end helped a great deal I think to reestablish his position as a teacher and responsible adult. :)
Incredible writing and characterization!
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| 28 Jun 2009 6:17 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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You continue to impress me with our well you portray the characters.
I hope that Harry and Snape can eventually learn to trust each other.
| Title: Trust, or Lack Thereof
| 07 Jul 2008 7:04 am
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| Reviewer: mwc (Signed)
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really enjoying the interaction of your harry and snape. looking forward to seeing where you take them. keep up the good work!
| Title: Trust, or Lack Thereof
| 04 Jul 2008 5:33 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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Wow! Really great story with an interesting and unique twist on Occlumency. Usually, these stories have Harry deciding he was wrong and immediately mastering Occlumency. In your story, Harry's got some maturing to do as well. I just can't wait to read more:)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like my interpretation. I hope you enjoy the fourth chapter, what with maturing Harry and all!
| Title: Trust, or Lack Thereof
| 03 Jul 2008 6:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Nightshade (Anonymous)
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NICE WORK!!! Please update soon!
Yay! A refreshing Snape/Harry occlumency perspective! It even makes sense! And you are a very good writer, and I completely love this story.
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