| Title: A Lesson, of a Different Sort
| 24 Jan 2022 11:53 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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This was an intriguing chapter
I appreciate how this chapter highlights an important distinction in the trust required - a subtle but important point.
I like how Snape maneuvered Harry into giving the information he sought, though I hope it leads to a change in approach!
Great chapter! I’m glad they’ve realized one of the true points of the lessons.
Another terrific start to your story
| Title: The Christmas Party
| 30 Jan 2016 5:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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| Title: The Christmas Party
| 27 Dec 2015 10:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous)
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ARGHHHHHH !! This is wonderful, it's so beautiful and the story flows so smoothly, it's p.e.r.f.e.c.t.i.o.n. It makes me feel so warm and fuzzy inside but at the same time it leaves me intrigued. A+++++ writing, I hope you can update soon.
Hello! Enjoying the story so far and looking forward to your next update whenever that may be ...
I suppose this has been abandoned, but I just wanted to write you and tell you that I really enjoyed it thus far.
My only critique would be to increase the pacing a little bit.
The characterizations were wonderful though. I especially liked your Luna. If you every decide to continue writing this, you'll have a reader in me :).
Hope you are well otherwise.
I liked the way you paralleled the book in your story. Too bad it was never finished. I would have been interesting to see how or if Harry would have reconciled Snape's killing Dumbledore or if it would have even happened.
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