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Reviews For Under Snape's Protection: Prisoner of Azkaban
Author's Response: I fixed that mistake. I'm typo prone...
I liked the way the Skeeter article read, but the use of "horrible things" in the last letter seemed a little young sounding for a ministry bureaucrat, unless you were going for "tongue-in-cheek". Author's Response: I get your and you're mixed up all the time. Ask anyone who I talk to on AIM and Windows Messenger. :P I glad you liked the Skeeter article. That was probably the easiest thing to write in the story thus far. As for the use of horrible things in the letter, with the exception of unbreakable vows, I couldn't find anything fightning enough and canon that will make you want to follow a binding magical contract so I left it rather vague. And who says that people in the ministry are serious? (ok, lame excuse...)
This is Smelly Cat710, It's cool to see you on P&S. Just wanted to say that I thought the Boy-Who-Lived-Abused article was well written, it sounded just like Rita Skeeter! (May she burn!!) Lol, It's cool that you updated so quickly! Scorpia Author's Response: People keep saying that the Boy-Who-Lived-Abused article was good. It must be because I read and watch the news... I didn't update the story so quickly. I wrote chapter 1 a week ago, posted it on my own website and waited for feed back from the people on teddylonglong's yahoo group before posting it here and on fanfiction.net. I don't know when chapter three will be done as that I have to write some report for a history class I am taking... Anyways, I'm glad you liked my story. |
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