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Reviews For Some Good Guys Wear Black
they hate to admit it but father knows best Author's Response: Especially when the dad is Severus! LOL!
Author's Response: Aw that's great! Thanks for your opinion!
Author's Response: Yes I know I've stretched him a bit thin here, but he rose to the challenge as you can see. Thanks for the great review and I look forward to reading more of your story as well.
Author's Response: Yes he will and he really likes it, even if he won't admit it. Thanks so much for the review.
Oh, and the last chapter...I just remembered... I thought it was brilliant how Harry mentioned the Dursleys when they were looking in on Gavin having his nightmare.... It was subtle and Snape didn't make a big deal about it... but I'm sure he heard. Sev is quiet the observant one, I believe ;) And finally, I adore the relationship that is developing between Gavin and Harry...like brothers. It was cute when Gavin was warning Harry about the potion... "Ugh...Don't drink it Harry! It tastes gross!" I loved that line. I love Gavin. I love story. Keep it up :) Author's Response: No, Sev certainly wouldn't say no to that. As a matter of fact he does discuss his views on spanking with Harry in an upcoming chapter, stressing the difference between what he would do and what Ferrous did. And I agree with you about those other fics that have the Dursleys battering Harry into the ground, it just isn't necessary to have that level of abuse and it isn't realistic. And yes, poor Gavin is damaged both physically and emotionally but with time and Sev's help, he will eventually heal.
And yes, Gavin and Harry are like brothers and Sev is their poor exasperated father, LOL!
Author's Response: Yes he is and Severus will too! |
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