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Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 05 Oct 2014 7:10 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ha, this is the middle of a long, involved story that includes 4 full-length novels and many, many other stories. Hundreds of chapters. It's not finished, so after all that reading you still won't have an ending. Be forewarned. Great author, but it takes work to track down all the parts to any of her stories because they are scattered across different series and websites.
Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 05 Oct 2014 6:58 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is not a free-standing story, it is number 9 in a incomplete WIP. Still, I read it as a stand-alone and understood it alright, even enjoying it most of the time. The story description says it is not a part of a series, but it is. It is the only story from the long pair of series that is Snape-Potter mentoring, so it is the only chapter eligible to be posted on this website. It is a singular Snape mentoring Harry story from a pair of series that are not normally involving this pair of characters. This is actually story # 9 in the combined series full of many original characters which are listed on fanfiction dot net under the author name snapegirlkmf. There are 8 stories in the Arista Snape seried, and then there are 4 stories in the "Dark Hunter Trilogy." This is the first story in the Dark Hunter Trilogy's. And another surprise, the 4th story in the so-called Trilogy is not even written yet, although it is named and described as a WIP.
Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 11 Mar 2009 2:57 pm
Reviewer: urshurak (Anonymous) [Report This]
    very good story, I enjoyed the reading very much!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! There is a sequel to this, only I can't post it here, since it's only Gavin and Sev in it, but I'll post it on FF.net eventually, my link over there is in my profile.
Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 25 Aug 2008 8:32 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My dear, I simply must applaud you for your unique and marvellous story. For the first time ever, I can honetly admit that I like Ginny. In your story, she is human with faults and flaws, which is very important to me. So ::bows:: thank you for that wonderful treat.

    I cannot wait to hear from you once your trip is over. Enjoy it!

    All my love,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Hey, you're welcome!

    So happy you liked this one.  There is a sequel to this by the way, which I didn't post here though because it doesn't have harry & Snape in it, only gavin and Sev and is told mostly from Gav's POV.  If you want to read it let me know and I'll email it to you soon as I get back home.  I finally got IN connected here and can't wait to answer all my reviews and I've just posted a chapter for Angel.

Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 23 Jul 2008 6:15 am
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the last line. It's a perfect way to end the story and tie in the title. This was a great story. Gavin is hilarious the little imp! I'd like more of this story if you ever have the time. Even a one-shot would be nice. I think it would be cool to see Gavin developing his fire powers and his Animal Speech. You're a very talented writer and I can't wait to read more of what you've written.

    Author's Response: Actually, there is a sequel to this story, but I can't post it up here because it doesn't have Harry in it.  It's mainly a Severus and Gavin father/son fic, though Monkey does reappear in it.  I could e-mail you it if you'd like.  It's called Someone To Watch Over Me.   There are also several stories that go along with this one, a series I wrote with Arista, Sev's daughter. It's on HPFF.COM under the same penname, starting with The Very Best Thing.  So glad you liked this one, it's one of my nephew's favorites.
Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 31 Mar 2008 6:14 pm
Reviewer: brenda-wood (Signed) [Report This]
    awesome

    love how hedwig calls them owlets

    the fists in the mouth- precious

    and if i recall there end up being a few little sevs alltold - I think they need to get together and meet and compare stories .....

    and have fun with grandpa of course

    Author's Response: Now there'a n idea for another story . . .someday!  Thanks for all the reviews, they were great na dyou're awesome!
Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 19 Mar 2008 1:14 am
Reviewer: wolfsbane (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwwww.....Ü turns into a goey pink mush on the floor

    Author's Response: Thanks, so glad you liked it! And if you want check out my other two stories here as well!
Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 17 Mar 2008 6:24 am
Reviewer: Shoshna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a wonderful story. You are an amazing author and i look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Major props for coming up with all the American stuff and the excellent plot. 10/10.

    Author's Response: Wow and thanks so much, I worked really hard on all of that, I tried to make it as realistic as possible and I like being original.  I have 2 other stories posted on here and more on harrypotterfanfiction.com under the same penname, if you want to check them out.
Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 16 Mar 2008 3:45 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    It's taken me ages to review, and I'm sorry. I do have to say that I love the way you ended this. I remember you commenting about how you weren't exactly sure of how Snape was going to deal with Gavin, and I have to say, I think it was perfect. Like you said, Gavin was abused, and even though Snape was ranting and raving about giving Gavin a spanking he'd remember, the kid was so devistated that sensing Severus's disappointment was enough. Though, the follow-up threat was very appropriate, I thought.

    As for the letter, I thought it was great and I could definitely imagine an adult Harry writing it. You've done a great job with keeping Harry in character. The P.S. puppy comment was really cute :) And I certainly love the names of the twins. I've always taken to the name Margaret, because I love the 40's ctress Margaret O'Brien and used to watch her movies constantly. lol.

    Are you planning on writing a sequel? I haven't begun reading your other story but am dying to catch up. You're a terrific writer, and you've done a marvelous job here. Keep the stories coming ;)

    Author's Response:

    Oh good, I must admit I was agonizing over the punishment part, because of that previous chapter, but I came to the realization that what Snape says in the heat of his temper will not always be what he does later on, especially after the terrible things Gavin had to endure at Draco's hand and also the kid was honestly sorry for what he'd done.  If he'd been a smartass or something, then I think Severus would've resorted to a spanking.  I have written a sequel, called Someone To warch Over Me, but can't post it here because it's a Gavin centered fic, and told mostly from his viewpoint, along with some of Severus's as well.  If you'd like to read it, let me know and I can email a copy to you.  Just post me an answer here.  I'm glad you liked the names of the twins, it took me a long time to come up with them, and my mom knows Margaret O'Brien.

    Thanks for the great review and I've posted a short one-shot as well for the Winter Fest fic challenge if you want to read that too!

Title: Epilogue--A Thank You 08 Mar 2008 6:20 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I READ THIS STORY IN ONE DAY! YOU DID A WONDERFULL!!!!!!!JOB!!!!!!! GIVE YOURSELF A PATT ON THE BACK.
    AGAIN GREAT WORK. Thank you for writing it.
    Nightshade

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'm very flattered!

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