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Reviews For Some Good Guys Wear Black
Author's Response: Yes, here we go again. Get ready Sev for an action packed summer!
Author's Response: Thanks and I first posted this because it was the only Harry/Sev story i had.
Author's Response: Wow and thanks so much, I worked really hard on all of that, I tried to make it as realistic as possible and I like being original. I have 2 other stories posted on here and more on harrypotterfanfiction.com under the same penname, if you want to check them out.
As for the letter, I thought it was great and I could definitely imagine an adult Harry writing it. You've done a great job with keeping Harry in character. The P.S. puppy comment was really cute :) And I certainly love the names of the twins. I've always taken to the name Margaret, because I love the 40's ctress Margaret O'Brien and used to watch her movies constantly. lol. Are you planning on writing a sequel? I haven't begun reading your other story but am dying to catch up. You're a terrific writer, and you've done a marvelous job here. Keep the stories coming ;) Author's Response: Oh good, I must admit I was agonizing over the punishment part, because of that previous chapter, but I came to the realization that what Snape says in the heat of his temper will not always be what he does later on, especially after the terrible things Gavin had to endure at Draco's hand and also the kid was honestly sorry for what he'd done. If he'd been a smartass or something, then I think Severus would've resorted to a spanking. I have written a sequel, called Someone To warch Over Me, but can't post it here because it's a Gavin centered fic, and told mostly from his viewpoint, along with some of Severus's as well. If you'd like to read it, let me know and I can email a copy to you. Just post me an answer here. I'm glad you liked the names of the twins, it took me a long time to come up with them, and my mom knows Margaret O'Brien. Thanks for the great review and I've posted a short one-shot as well for the Winter Fest fic challenge if you want to read that too!
AGAIN GREAT WORK. Thank you for writing it. Nightshade Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'm very flattered!
Author's Response: Yes, I really loved making Draco the bad guy. And Gavin was really fun to write as well, I've actually written another story with just him and Severus told from mostly Gavin's POV. I'm thinking of posting it up on FF.net one of these days. I've alos got a new fic up here, Hide Yourself Away, where Harry & Sev are related, something new for me to write about. Thanks for the great review and I look forward to seeing you write more of Lily's Charm.
Author's Response: Thanks and I felt that it was deserved! So glad you liked it!
Author's Response: yeah, he really wanted to help him, since he felt guilty about not noticing Harry needed help when he was in school and Harry needs a mentor/father figure.
Author's Response: yes, you're absolutely right, after all he'd been tortured by bloody Draco and he'd also suffered with the knowledge that he'd killed someone with his magic.
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm so glad you liked it. I wanted to show something different from the usual fics and I'm very happy that I succeeded. I always thought Draco got away with murder in the original novels and which was why I didn't let him here! |
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