Wow that was some interesting magic that Gavin summoned. It's nice to see him calling Sev dad too.
Author's Response: yes, he finally took Monkey's advice and he'll be a very powerful wizard when he's grown.
"Shoot, girl, you hit better than Babe Ruth," -Great line! And excellent chapter too! :)
Author's Response: Thanks and I loved writing Monkey, she was very fun and interesting. Gavin and her might be an item someday!
Wow that was a pretty interesting creature!
Author's Response: Yes, I enjoyed creating the fire salamander, she is actually semi-based on an alligator and a dragon!
That was a perfect ending to this story. Love the names of the twins I think the world deserves another Lily and Severus. Harry's letter was great you can really see how much he's matured and really come to respect and love Severus. I would absolutely love to see a sequel to this story to see how everyone is getting along, especially Grandpa Severus. Thank you so much for writing such a great original story. Love your work and can't wait for the next one so keep writing. LES
Author's Response: I actually have written a sequel to this, but I can't post it here since it's strictly Gavin and Sev. I may post it on FF.net though, as soon as I figure out how to post chapters instead my entire story. I'm glad you enjoyed it, In the sequel you will see how Sev reacts to his new grandchild, it's very funny!
| Title: Epilogue--A Thank You
| 05 Mar 2008 11:23 pm
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A little short, but a nice conclusion to a great story. :)
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've posted another fic up here, very different from this one if you'd like to read it.
| Title: To Grandmother's House We Go
| 05 Mar 2008 11:21 pm
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Love the quote!
Author's Response: Thanks and please read the rest!
| Title: Aftermath
| 05 Mar 2008 11:20 pm
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I Don't think Sev's punishment was trick enough for all he did. I mean, he broke a lot of serious rules. I loved the story though.
Author's Response: True he did, but he also was punished by having the Cruciatus curse put on him and killing Goyle, that's a hell of a burden for a child to carry. Thanks for your review and I hope you lik the rest of it.
I didn't read this chapter yet, but I couldn't resist seeing who the Shifter was! I had a feeling it was Draco Malfoy! :P
Author's Response: Yeah you were right! Nasty old draco! And it just gets worse!
Great chapter! I noticed you posted several chapters but it's already 1am and I have classes tomorrow. So, regretfully I'll have to finish these up tomorrow evening!
Author's Response: I did and you'll find the rest of this fic posted today since I've finished it!
I think Severus is going to be very suprised when he finds out about this new talent, also I would think a little worried, now considering that he has to watch out for this as well, and it's another thing for Gavin to learn on how to control and use to his advantage. Can't wait for the reunion, keep up the awesome work. Thanks again for the quick updates, it makes reading this great story that much more enjoyable. LES
Author's Response: Thanks and I will be posting a whole bunch of chapters tomorrow because I'm leaving for Fl in the afternoon and won't be able to post successively on vacation! So get ready for the rest of it, because I just finished it tonight!
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