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Title: Cat and Mouse 03 Mar 2008 4:46 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Intresting chapter. I love that you made Severus an animagus. Curious to see what happened to Gavin and Severus' reaction. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Yeah, I've always wanted to do that and I chose to make him a falcon rather than the usual snake, bat, and panther, I've seen in other stories.  he always reminded me of a falcom somehow, maybe it's the nose!  You'll see more of Gavin in the next chapter and Sev's really gonna flip out.
Title: Cat and Mouse 03 Mar 2008 4:37 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Galvin is missing!? I really hope he decided to run away rather than something bad like getting snatched by the Shifter. That wouldn't be good! I really like this chapter since it was a bit intense with them following the Shifter guy. Really good story so far and I look forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and yes, Gavin really is missing and in big trouble too.  But well, you'll see what I'm talking about soon enough.  And things are goign to start getting even more intense soon!

Title: The Game's Afoot 02 Mar 2008 8:42 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, first, I want to join the Severus Club - right. Really, if he knows he is going to get that kind of reaction, polyjuice or something would be advisable.

    Also, is the story about how his leg was injured anywhere on the 'net. I read the one about how he met Amelia and then discovered his daughter and the strike against the gold dragons, but I can't find any others.

    Anyway - awesome story

    Author's Response:

    That's my series you've been reading and the reason why you haven't seen the part about his leg being injured is because I haven't posted that book up yet.  It's called Arista Snape and the Ghost sin the Tower & I'll be posting it as soon as the last chapter of bronze dragons gets validated on HPFF.  That's when you'll get the whole story about the war with Lucius and Voldemort and it's where Sev nearly dies. 

    Second, he doesn't usually get his fangirls quite so riled up and well, you know that kind of thing happens to celebrities.  And yes, I'm a member of his fan club--LOL!

    Thanks for your reviews!

Title: The Game's Afoot 01 Mar 2008 7:31 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Mmm popcorn and soda for a review! Sounds good! Anyways, this was another really good chapter! I like seeing Snape and Harry working together. It's a shame they weren't able to get anything off that note, but then again, I doubted they would anyway. Keep up the great work! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks and yes, now Sev and Harry have to do some real detective work!
Title: Memories and Messages 01 Mar 2008 1:40 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm so he wants the Resurrection Stone? Personally, I'd prefer the Invisibility cloak! :)

    Author's Response: Yes well you'll see why he wants the Resurrection Stone! And the cloak is with Dumbledore's body. 
Title: Early Morning Reflections 29 Feb 2008 5:04 pm
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I love the interaction between Sev & Gavin, it's so typical of a ten year old & his dad, as i well know having raised 4 kids. Love the way Harry & Gavin talk too, it's like seeing my two sons.

    Author's Response: Aw that's great! Thanks for your opinion!
Title: Early Morning Reflections 29 Feb 2008 4:39 am
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    Three great chapters! Poor Snape had Galvin to comfort and Harry too. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to reading more soon!

    Author's Response: Yes I know I've stretched him a bit thin here, but he rose to the challenge as you can see.   Thanks for the great review and I look forward to reading more of your story as well.
Title: Nightmares 29 Feb 2008 3:36 am
Reviewer: burns603 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw this chapter was so great! I love the way Severus handles Gavin and Harry's nightmares and I really want to strangle Ferrous. I cried, this was so moving! Keep writing.

    Author's Response: Aw thanks so much! I'm glad you felt so strongly about this.  And yes, Ferrous deserves to be boiled in oil, grrr!
Title: Early Morning Reflections 29 Feb 2008 3:14 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    lol that was really cute. It looks like Severus is going to have two kids on his hands for a while. I love how much Harry is a kid at heart. Really starting to love this story, keep up the great work and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Yes he will and he really likes it, even if he won't admit it.  Thanks so much for the review.
Title: Early Morning Reflections 28 Feb 2008 11:18 pm
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    They make such a lovely little family. :) I like how we got some more insight into Snape as a guardian in this chapter. He has always seemed like the kind of person who wouldn't say no to a bar of soap for the F-word..lol. Also, I thought it was good that you marked the differences between discipline and outright beating, referring back to the previous chapter and Gavin's dream. I appreciate how you made the abuse believable in the last chapter, rather than going on and on about Gavin getting pummelled and left for dead... A lot of fics have the Dursleys beating Harry within an inch of his life. And to me, it's just not that believable. Or necessary. But in this fic, Gavin is still damaged, even though the abuse wasn't incredibly severe...he suffered more from the emotional abuse and constant title of the "Devil's Spawn" (or something along those lines).

    Oh, and the last chapter...I just remembered... I thought it was brilliant how Harry mentioned the Dursleys when they were looking in on Gavin having his nightmare.... It was subtle and Snape didn't make a big deal about it... but I'm sure he heard. Sev is quiet the observant one, I believe ;)

    And finally, I adore the relationship that is developing between Gavin and Harry...like brothers. It was cute when Gavin was warning Harry about the potion...

    "Ugh...Don't drink it Harry! It tastes gross!"

    I loved that line. I love Gavin. I love story. Keep it up :)

    Author's Response:

    No, Sev certainly wouldn't say no to that.  As a matter of fact he does discuss his views on spanking with Harry in an upcoming chapter, stressing the difference between what he would do and what Ferrous did.  And I agree with you about those other fics that have the Dursleys battering Harry into the ground, it just isn't necessary to have that level of abuse and it isn't realistic.  And yes, poor Gavin is damaged both physically and emotionally but with time and Sev's help, he will eventually heal. 

     

    And yes, Gavin and Harry are like brothers and Sev is their poor exasperated father, LOL!


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