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Title: Harry's Plea 26 Feb 2008 3:04 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I love this! Okay, you've hooked me. Severus is wonderful in this story, and we don't even have to wait dozens of chapters for him to ditch his cold, heartless side...lol. Gavin's adorable. I want to snuggle him...the poor thing. There's nothing worse than being sick with the stomach flu, but I love how you had Severus take care of him--feeding him potions and stroking his hair. Adorable.

    And with the addition of Harry...asleep on the couch...this was exactly the warm sort of chapter that I needed to feel better tonight. Thanks for an awesome story! I can't wait for the next chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Oh lovely, I aim to please and am glad you enjoyed it.  I love writing Sev and Harry this way and gavin, well he's a mischievous and lovable scamp, as you'll see later on. 

Title: Harry's Plea 26 Feb 2008 2:48 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Very intresting, and cute. Really intrested to see what happened to Ginny. Keep up the great work and please update again soon. I really love the original idea behind this story. LES

    Author's Response: Thanks, and I shall have regular updates just so you know.  Sev and Harry have quite a bit of detective work ahead of them to discover the Shifter's ID and where he's taken Ginny.
Title: The Spymaster 26 Feb 2008 2:39 am
Reviewer: Jade_Sullivan (Signed) [Report This]
    An interesting start! I think this story is one of the most original I've seen in quite a while. It's odd to think of Severus working in America... my imagination is spinning with this story ;)

    I like the idea of incorporating Gavin into the story. I thought it was cute that Severus compared him to ten Harry Potters.

    Keep going with this; it's good!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much, I like trying new things and putting the characters in different and unusual situations.  You'll see more of Gavin, who is a very strong wizard, and yet also a very needy child, one who like Harry and Severus, benefits greatly from a father figure in his life. 

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