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Reviews For Miles to Go Before I Sleep
Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)
I love the way that you drew Severus, and how you described her first master... it made me wonder who it was. ( : Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed turning the tables on the pet/human relationship. And giving Hedwig a deeper past.
Author's Response: You're welcome! I enjoyed writing it. Hedwig is lovely, isn't she? :)
Author's Response: I know! And in a cage! She could have at least been flying free, defending her boy. Thank you for the review!
Author's Response: Thank you. That made me smile. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! "Were we supposed to figure out who Hedwig's first boy was?" No, I left it deliberately vague. If the boy was a well-known character, it might have come across as too coincidental and contrived. But if you like, it could be a very minor character. A distant Weasley relative who died in the war, perhaps?
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the different elements.
So, no evil eye for the delay to NSR. I'll just sit here, tapping my fingers and staring hopefully at my computer screen until the next chapter of that story arrives. ;) Author's Response: Ha. You forgot to add, "No pressure." *significant throat clearing* Tap, tap, tap... "I like that the story is strictly between Hedwig and Snape with Harry as a silent catalyst" I was a little worried that there was too little Harry & Snape interaction, but it just worked this way. And really, the story is about Harry, as seen through other eyes.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I'm happy you enjoyed it. I'm rather fond of that last line, myself. :)
You had a couple of typos: The felt the tip of a wand against her body, and the shivering abated. (She felt?) When the cloak was pulled away, she was amazed to find herself in front of the boxy next... (nest) He was pocketed the glasses (pocketing) He placed the boy on a bed conjured a perch for her. (and conjured) Author's Response: Ah, thanks. This was pretty rough draft-y. I prefer to take more time and do a re-write, but if I waited any longer, then it would be too late for the "winter" part of Winter Fic Fest! I'll go back and fix the typos. Glad you liked it! Describing the Dursleys through Hedwig's eyes was fun. |
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