“Well, could it be because I have anxiety!”
SUCH AN AWESOME LINE. Except it should read "Well, it could be because I have anxiety!" to really make sense with the exclamation mark, otherwise it's phrased like an angry question...but with no question mark! (Scandalous, I know.)
Also, D'AWWW HARRY.
Anyhow, I shall Continue Reading Now.
Lall the description of harry's thoughts. nice chap.
nice panic attack! you wrote it very well!
Poor Harry! he really needs to get some kind of psych counseling, otherwise he's going to go postal or something. And I can't wait to see the results of Snape's potion! Great chapter!
Author's Response: I think going postal is a good way to put it. Harry has never received the help he needs and that is mostly due to the fact that most of the adults in his life either hated him (the Dursleys) or are unaware that he has been made to suffer prior to coming to Hogwarts (and don't forget those dreadful summers). Thanks for the review!
I feel so bad for Harry! I just want to hold him and then ask him for Draco's number---Did I justy say that! Lol, So great chapter I can't wait for more!
Poor Harry. You have done a good job of illustrating that Harry needs someone who really sees him. This is a small start in that direction.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 16 Mar 2008 8:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Excellent chapter! Your writing was wonderful. I loved the ending when Harry thought about the things that happened with the Dursleys, questions that I had thought of too, but had never seen in a story. The dream of endlessness was a really good idea. I think if I lived life like he did, with no one to call my own, no one to care if I did well or not so well on school work or a Quidditch move or whatever, I'd have similar feelings. I have a feeling you'll address Snape's realization of his fatherhood realistically too, you've done well so far. I'm really looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I really wanted to touch upon a very young Harry and how a small child of 2 or 3 years of age might have been treated by people like Vernon and Petunia. I have a 2 year old, and it just breaks my heart to think of him all alone with no one to love him, hold him or even help him take care of his basic needs.
Awww, those memories are heartbreaking. I always wondered how those first couple of years were for Harry, because it's highly unlikely Aunt Petunia cared more than to changed him a couple times a day and sit a plate of food in front of him and expect him to eat it whole without choking or something :( What a bunch of pricks the Dursley's were.
This story is really starting to intrigue me. I hope you have the ability to update soon!
Author's Response: I will be bring to light more aspects of Harry's early years with the Dursleys. It won't be pretty. Glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the review.
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